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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Silence We need that from time to time, Why does it feel like a painful crime? Uploaded with pain cutting through my heart. Are we really going to fall apart? No sign from you, not even a single word.... Only silence cutting my heart as a sharp sword.... Silence Is telling me that I am losing you, My heart is screaming out loud for you, Tell me was our love only a lie...a dream? Sharing those times, weren't they what it means? Guess that I failed with my love for you.... Take to much your strength, when you needed some too. Silence Oh this painful silence.... Silence filled with my tears.... Silence affirmative my fears... Silence that surrounding me... Silence without words to see... Oh this killing me... Silence |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Charisma, can kinda relate to this. Nicely put  I enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The sound of silence...you will know soon...silence is only a moment in time...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you Dark Angel, I understand what you are meaning thank you too James, ...appreciate your words....and know that they are so right. Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The pain of silence is worse than the pain of bitter words...I'll take the words over silence anyday...because what I'm thinking is usually worse than what they could say Great writing~ |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
It's funny how loud silence can be sometimes isn't it?  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so. B. Russell |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
butterflies, I'll hear you and agree with you... )JP...yep.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sometimes silence is good..other times it screams louder than noise... good writing here charisma..it speaks loud and clear.. hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The worst thing about silence is the not knowing of what is in the others mind. Much worse than hearing the words. Wonderful write from you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Wonderful write on silence, very nicely done. Kathleen |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Slince is the worst of all reactions. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
dgvarner: you heard the silence, thank you for your reaction Mark: not knowing what is going on in another mind make it worser, you have that so right thank youIrish Rose: thank you Maria Byrne: true, nothing worser than that,  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Charisma... hey this is really good - I checked out your homepage and noticed you haven't been writing in English long - you're doing very well! I admire any person who can create poetry in another language - that's really awesome. K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ The silence can be deafening. In visiting your homepage I glimpsed a lovely talent. I hope to find the time to peruse it fully. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Severn: that's true I started to write in english in januari this year, and doesn't speak speak it very well....I bet everyone is laughing when they hear my tongue thank you for the compliment I am honoured that you take the time to visit my homepage )Marge: thank you for your comment..... ) and also for the visit of my homepage, I truly hope that you like it, I am busy to rewrite some of my poems, have noticed the faults and some missing parts.....cause I am learning... ) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Charisma beautiful poem! silence is sometimes the loudest noise of all...ironic. excellent poem filled with longing and sadness. first piece of your work i have read. enjoyed very much and look forward to reading more from you. *hugs* amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Aimster: thank you for your comment, I am happy that you like my poem, and you are so right...silence can be very noisy. |
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