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Collins
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0 posted 2000-10-04 09:34 PM



Pass me the remote control,
i've had enough of this show.
it's giving me a headache,
the plot just does not flow.

Pass me the remote control,
because the time has come,
for a quick change of view,
i'm sick of feeling dumb.

Turn off the t.v. set.
Theres nothing worth to see.
Its only makes you forget,
but i want to remember me.


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Horizon
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1 posted 2000-10-04 10:20 PM


And that is why I got rid of cabel. LOL
very good read, I enjoyed it!  

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2 posted 2000-10-04 10:23 PM


Yes we tend to fall into Zombie mode in front of the tv.

A great message here Collins  

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3 posted 2000-10-05 02:43 AM


Collins, believe it or not, I don't own a TV and I'm glad of that. People say that those who don't wach much TV are more intellegent than those who spend a lot of time in front of the tube.
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4 posted 2000-10-06 06:35 AM


LOL...

I agree...TV is mind numbing...
good sometimes - but only is you WANT to be mind-numbed...

enjoyable piece!

K

Collins
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5 posted 2000-10-06 08:39 PM


Thanks for your kind replies.  
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6 posted 2000-10-06 08:42 PM


I know how you feel, no matter how many channels you have sometimes you just can't find anything worth watching on TV. I like this one it made me laugh

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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7 posted 2000-10-06 08:44 PM


pass me the remote control
don't think so, cause I never may hold that one,....that's why I am online....who need the remote control.
love this one, great writing and made me smile  

Charisma

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8 posted 2000-10-06 08:54 PM


Thank you again. I'm glad you all enjoyed it.  
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