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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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dream child- ever elusive... will i ever know your smile- your laugh- the touch of your tiny hand in mine what do you look like- i wonder... it doesn't matter- you're beautiful in my eyes my child... my dream- how i long for the day when i will hold you in my arms... i love you, sweet baby... i miss you -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening vlraynes, This writing that you have done is very touching and tender. The sweetest I can also sense. Very well done. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
What a lovely poem!!!! Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ This is so tender. Beautiful, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Vicky, Very tender and caring......an emotional read. Very good write. Jenn E |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bill- thank you so much for the kind words. glad you liked it.  Xeonox- wow! thanks for your enthusiastic response.  so glad you liked this.Marge- hi, friend. this was actually writtenseveral years ago, but the feelings still come back to haunt me from time to time. thanks so much for the kind words. Jenn E- thanks so much for the kind response. this was an emotional write, as well. glad you enjoyed it. LOVE YOU ALL, -vicky< !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Vicky, you've expressed this so beautifully. Such tender and sweet emotions flow through these lines ... you touched my heart more deeply than you may know with this piece. Sigh ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Touched my heart.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kit- thank you so much for the sweet response. so glad this touched you. thanks for reading. Victoria- thank you so much. glad you like this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this one gives me chills tricks... hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- thank you. gave me chills when i waswriting it too. glad you like it. love you bunches, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A warm, soft and tender longing...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
James- Thank you so much for the gentle words. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vicky, So soft and sweet. A hint of sadness in there too. Nice writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I wrote a poem with the same name...and the theme the same...this brings it back with a tear...very beautiful tender writing. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lone Wolf- Thank you so much for the kind words. They mean a lot to me. Martie- Glad this one touched you. Would love to see your poem by this name sometime. Thank you so much for responsing. Love ya, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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