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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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0 posted 2000-10-03 02:41 PM


Somewhere, anywhere,
  nowhere

Somehow just let me
be near
near to your side
nowhere to hide
but within your heart

  

Can you hear the beating
of my heart as we connect
heart to heart

  
We are one
that once was two
can't you feel there's
something new

a new breath of air
we are something rare
that only happens once
in a life time
so feel my soul
touch my heart
so my darling
we will never part
but stay together
for all eternity



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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-03 02:44 PM


RB1229~ Love this, very nice!   -SEA
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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2 posted 2000-10-03 03:13 PM


Oh, I loved this poem!! It reminded me of a friend of mine and I sure wish I could have said it like that! Very nice,My Friend.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-10-03 10:25 PM


"We are one
that once was two
can't you feel there's
something new"

Beautiful expression of newly found love Rosebud ... lovely sentiments!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2000-10-03 11:01 PM


thank you Sea, Saunni, and Kit, love no matter how old or new is still is exciting, it's what makes you want to be near the one you love. As I said before I love romance
Rosebud1229
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5 posted 2000-10-03 11:03 PM


Just though I would let you know the first three words somewhere, anywhere, nowhere, means to me that it doesn't matter where you are with the one you love just as long as your with them that's what counts.
snowpants
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6 posted 2000-10-03 11:40 PM


There is nothing better than romance!  I absolutely loved this one!!  Wonderful write!!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Rosebud1229
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7 posted 2000-10-03 11:42 PM


thx snowpants romance does warm our hearts when nothing seems to be going right.
just_another_fe
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8 posted 2000-10-03 11:48 PM


beautiful *applause*

snowpants
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9 posted 2000-10-03 11:50 PM


Isn't that the truth?!  Everything could fall apart around me, but, give me a little romance, and, well, let's just say, it's not so bad anymore!

sp

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2000-10-03 11:52 PM


Yeppers......you got it.....it don't matter where you are if you are in love.....just as long as you are in love.  Nice feeling isn't it?????
Rosebud1229
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11 posted 2000-10-03 11:55 PM


thanks Angie, true love does make your hearts connect, and sometimes your thoughts as well.
Rosebud1229
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12 posted 2000-10-03 11:58 PM


Mark it's the best feeling in the world, and I've been here awhile! lol and I haven't experience anything as good as love, as being with the one you love no matter how you feel through the day when your able to just touch the one you love it makes everything o.k again. Just like magic
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