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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-10-02 07:30 PM


pondering though the yesterdays,
Reliving the past,
Staring at the starry sky,
No moon to put up tonight,
Tommorrow will be a new moon,
But I'll still take memories,
Of yesterday.


There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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Maria~ I definately know how this is........enjoyed this........ -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Moon Dust
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2 posted 2000-10-03 01:57 PM


Thank u for reading

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-10-03 10:17 PM


Very nicely expressed Maria!  Yesterday's memories shine so brightly sometimes, it's hard to let go ... lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2000-10-03 11:16 PM


Wish I didn't, but can definitely relate!  Loved the poem!  Wonderfully written!

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Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

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5 posted 2000-10-04 01:47 PM


Thanks both for reading

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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6 posted 2000-10-04 07:41 PM


The memories can be both good and bad but never the less they will be there for us to dwell upon.  Wonderful read from you Maria....really enjoyed this one.
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7 posted 2000-10-05 01:40 PM


Aren't they just thanks Mark

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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8 posted 2000-10-05 02:19 PM


fell like that too many time
true words my friend

If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



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9 posted 2000-10-05 02:26 PM


Avanti - thanks. But never let go of the merories

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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