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to her lasting memory |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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i love the quiet of your creation. i love the gentle lace of your moon. i love the tree shadows over the grass on a hill of someone who died for our happiness. i love the spiderdew windowpanes. i love your face of porcelain flesh. i love your lips of grape jelly agate you spilled on your dress when you laughed. i love the silent clock's movements. i love the song you played with your eyes. i love the moment you gave me a memory. i even love the way you said goodbye. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And it looks like she gave you many memories to Love and I hope some new experiences to Love...James |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Moments of memories, Memories of Moments beautiful...  GE |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
oh gosh and I love this!...this is so soft and beautiful, not like some of the ones of yours i have read....let me say love looks good on you |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
bsquirrel, I just love the way you put things. This poem was so soft and tender A job well done (as usual).~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
James, Glad you enjoyed. Greeneyes, Thanks. jinxed, All the same person. Just sometimes you have to look at things differently so you don't destroy yourself. rosepetals25, Why, thanks! Mike |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ You make me want to hug you. My favorite line is "I love the song you played with your eyes" ~ Breathtaking. -SEA |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
whew mr. b. squirrel, you said a mouth full there " Just sometimes you have to look at things differently so you don't destroy yourself."....think i will print that and reread it several times a day...still good to see you on the other side...am tired of the dark too...just need to look for the light i guess...wow...you are a thinker that's for sure |
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