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Ganymede
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since 2000-09-27
Posts 3


0 posted 2000-10-01 05:00 PM


Tag me with graceless prose
you, fool that you are
do not control me
nor do you see hope.

Tag me a faceless soul
you, insecure of your time
cannot comprehend how love
may come to my heart.

Tag me a romantic
and I shall prove you correct
for this is my mind's eye
that captures our love.


[This message has been edited by Ganymede (edited 10-01-2000).]

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-10-01 05:24 PM


Ganymede,
I loved this post. It has echoes of familiarity about it, that I can't put my finger on. Good write.
Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
2 posted 2000-10-01 07:46 PM


And I here I thought that "tags" were just for dogs!  LOL      

Your writing is very deep and has a great deal of emotion to it.  You have a very talented pen.  

Marina  


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Martinque
Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69

3 posted 2000-10-02 12:26 PM


Another well written piece my friend.  I really like the last line.  Nothing is better then love.  
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