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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
Not in the weave of words you spun Did I see your heart today But on the rays of the sun A renewed hope blew my way I can feel when you’re breaking Tasting your tears upon my lips While you’re soul is aching From it’s depths I take long sips I sense when hope fills your eyes Basking in it’s glow allowing it to fill While you’re dancing in twilight skies A melody of dreams come at free will I dance in the meadows of your smile And drown in the tide of your pain Feeling each beat of your hear in each trial Watching and waiting to see you conquer again When you feel like you have been left alone Like the rainbows of hope will never show When the cold breeze of lonely cuts to bone Close your eyes...take a deep breath....I know |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hello Tears of Grace~ welcome to passions new poet you've made a lovely entrance and first impression with this poem of acceptance, hope, understanding & promise. I look forward to more of your poetry. take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions!!!! What a wonderful first post. I too love the optimism and promise in this one. I do believe we are going to like you here. So as they say around here "see ya in the blue pages" Excellent write!!!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A very nice entree, indeed - Welcome to Passion, ToG... You'll love it here - It's a wonderful place to be... Check your email for a special greeting...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so full of caring...tenderness and loving...Oh but I do, welcome you to the forum! I look forward to reading many more. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Tears of Grace, Welcome!...and entering this home with this beautiful poem..... I dance in the meadows of your smile And drown in the tide of your pain... These lines especially will roll around my mind today. Beautiful  ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"When you feel like you have been left alone Like the rainbows of hope will never show When the cold breeze of lonely cuts to bone Close your eyes...take a deep breath....I know" Welcome to Passions Tears_of_Grace! What a beautiful first post, full of understanding and empathy for the trials of others. Very lovely, I hope to read more. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a truly wonderful entrance you have made into our world...welcome to Passions |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Welcome to the family. A great way of walking through the door. Wonderful work. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
what an entrance! all about the understanding so deeply of someone else. i know this feeling very well. this is a beuatiful verse; i smiled with many of the images and chills went up my back at the end. =) "Close your eyes...take a deep breath....I know" Welcome to Passions. i hope your stay is long and enjoyable. The bellhop will be down to take your bags. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tears of grace, This is so lovely I know you will love your stay and I know we will love having you Welcome to the world of Passions.< !signature--> ~~Tara aka rp25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Tears~that was beautiful. It really shows how much you love the person you wrote it about. Great work, and welcome to Passions. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
Thank you so much for your warm welcome. I'm very suprised, but happily so. Your comments are so warm and kind. Thank you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing tears....James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome my friend. . . This is a wonderful poem. . . it's nice to just "know" isn't it? Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
Thank you both for being so nice and replying to my poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TearsOfGrace~ What a lovely, lovely entrance. Welcome to the family of Passions. We know you will enjoy your stay. Lots to read and lots of talented folks here. Browse around all of the forums and you will find much to delight you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Welcome!  Very artistic start you have here. Beautifully written. Deb |
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