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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-09-30 10:31 PM


Poor Worm

Left over bait
stiff as a board
stuck it to him he did

Right in the heart
no jump start here!
no fun being left over bait

On a rock the stiff worm bakes
waiting to be some morning birds take
poor worm, can't even squirm

Darn that cricket!
hope he's having fun on his joy ride

BloomingRose



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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-30 10:42 PM


ROFL @ you and that poor worm....his tadpole mate is gonna really be upset.  YOU are far too cute my friend and since you like challenges soooooooooo much .... how about writing me one about the dragonfly and the raccoon....lol..... Loved the verse and got lots of chuckle out of it.
BloomingRose
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2 posted 2000-09-30 10:53 PM


Ok Mark
Your on! Tomorrow perhaps you'll see a racoon on a tree...

hehehe

Deb

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2000-10-05 10:00 PM


You kids and your bugs...

too cute!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-10-05 10:17 PM


Thank you Sunshine~ it's fun to play with words!

Deb

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