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Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-30 12:03 PM


When we share hearts in loving bond
As deeply as sea’s clash is loud;
Smooth motion over obstacles~
Together~ flows with hands clenched proud.

When cool dawn brings no balmy sun
And rough storm churns skies overhead.....
Attempts to strike its lightening rod,
Unravel ropes to baring thread.....

Clasp tight; grasp firm, with arms console,
Secure my warmth into your strength.
Put thunder's scare to respite quake,
Dry soulful clouds; make short their length.

When we share hearts in calming bond,
Our fears lay quelled, fall underdressed.
When we make one, the siege abates;
Life's worries fade to nothingness.


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...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture




[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-30-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-09-30 12:06 PM


Chansondegeste~ this is great!   -SEA
Chanson
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2 posted 2000-09-30 12:09 PM


Sea, your kind words mean so much!
Thank you    

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



SEA
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3 posted 2000-09-30 12:11 PM


Chansondegeste~ You are most welcome   I like this very much!   -SEA
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-10-05 04:52 PM


I thought this was truly beautiful!

Kathleen


Waverly917
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5 posted 2000-10-05 05:45 PM


How wonderful.  ...sigh... I love it.

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

Chanson
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6 posted 2000-10-05 06:39 PM


Irish Rose...Waverly, thank you!....very much  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



Marsha
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7 posted 2000-10-05 06:41 PM


This is really lovely, a beautiful poem, excellantly written.
Take care
                         Marsha

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
8 posted 2000-10-05 07:33 PM


Once in a while I get caught in the current so I go with the flow  
Thank you Marsha  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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North Carolina
9 posted 2000-10-05 07:43 PM


Chanson, what a lovely piece of work you have created here. This was a pleasure to read.
Juls

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2000-10-05 08:02 PM


Tis the only way to live life is it not?  Lovely poem my friend.  Love seeing the heart side of you in each word and line.


Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
11 posted 2000-10-05 08:33 PM


Juls, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for peeking in and offering your kindness  
Your visit is very much appreciated~


Mark, I guess I did put some heart into this one. Afterall, a heart is a terrible thing to waste  
Thank you my friend~


...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



Wilfred Yeats
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12 posted 2000-10-05 08:38 PM


Love as it should be- may it continue to grow and strengthen - my wish for you - you've expressed this most beautifully~S~

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
13 posted 2000-10-05 09:23 PM


It helps to have good wishes from good friends. Thank you muchly, Wil  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



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