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You're not a Stranger
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You're not a Stranger |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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You're not a Stranger..........  I haven’t known you long, But in my heart I feel I’ve known you all along… The melody we make, to me, is much more sweet than any earthly song… And everyone can see within the words how much, and just how far we go… You’re not a stranger……there’s no danger…… You’re just a man that I’m so proud to know… You’ve opened up this heart without a key, and made yourself at home in me… And for the first time, I am not afraid to give, and set my spirit free… With your tender words and loving heart, You touch me at my very soul… You’re not a stranger…….there’s no danger…… You’re a man who took my halves, and made me whole… I’ll always wonder at the way I feel inside, Each time I hear your voice… It beckons to my heart, my heart obeys and I am yours without a choice… My gypsy heart is strong and true and Dares to touch the gypsy heart in you… You’re not a stranger……there’s no danger… Let us dance beneath the gypsy moon… So, now I tell the world that I am waiting at Your door….please let me in… I’ve come to know you better, and I know that You are more than just my friend… I can’t predict the future, But I do know what you mean to me, today… You’re not a stranger, there’s no danger… these words my heart compelled my pen to say… So, please accept my gift of thoughts, They’re all this humble poet has to share… These words are filled with magic, And they’ll show you just how much I’ve come to care… And maybe Lady Fate will smile upon us.. Our two worlds will join as one… You’re not a stranger……..there’s no danger… For two gypsy souls, This journey’s just begun….. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a sincere, honest reflection of your heart.. well expressed promise of devotion and hope fate will make is self known... love the gypsy theme and picture to match take care jm |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi JM.... It's so good to see you here....and I really appreciate your reply, as you are one of my inspirational muses here at Passions! Thank you for your thoughts!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh Sunny....this was such a tender display of emotions.......you deserve so much hapiness. Your heart is filled with so much love...I hope fate shows it's way. Warm Smiles Jenn E |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"You’ve opened up this heart without a key, and made yourself at home in me…" Oh Sunny, there is so much genuine love and feeling in these beautiful words. They sing your heart so purely ... simply lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jenn E.... Thank you so much for coming by to read my thoughts!! It's always good to see you here...... Kit.... I'm glad that my feelings came through in this one......and I'm so very glad that you came by to read!! Thank you! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Sunny1 Although it's a rainy night in Georgia, you have again brought sunshine to this peots day. This was excellent as always. Keep 'em coming. I love to read. Garfield |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, It's just awesome what you are doing with the art work. Congratulations, as it looks great. And by the way, wonderful poem. Bill |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi ggrn3... Thank you for your reply, and I hope the rain stops for you down there! I've only been to Georgia once, but I thought it was a beautiful place!! Hi Bill... I'm especially glad that you liked this poem, and thank you for noticing the artwork. I'm learning by the search and seize method!! Ha!! Thank you!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunny, you have so much romanticism, inspiration, hope and whole bunches of good feelings in this poem! I'm very happy for you... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh boy, I hope this guy is worthy...he surely wouldn't want to have to answer to me...take care of your heart darlin'...but love well... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Mr.'Deer'.... I guess I'm just a hopeless romantic at heart, and it shows sometimes!! Thank you for being so nice in your replies......it sure means a lot to this gypsy heart....... Hello Sunshine.... How do we ever know if something as elusive as love is going to turn out right, or be worthy? I've never found an answer......but I appreciate your support, my sister. Now, let's go walk on the beach or something!!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I know one gypsy girl that has a heart of gold. You have opened your heart wide open here and the view is beautiful to say the least. Well penned my friend and my wishes for your happiness. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You're no stranger theres no danger you'd ever be misunderstood with your passionate words and your open heart. Fabulous. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark..... Sometimes I just have to say what I think, and hope the point gets across the way I want it too. Thank you for giving this a read, my friend..... Hi Kethry..... It's so good to see you here, and your words of reply are a welcome sight, too! Thank you.......... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny1 this another gem, a real diamond I love this. It's just sooooooooo great, You're not a stranger .......... there's no danger Oh this is such a good one, well done stand up and take your bows.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marsha.... Oh, thank you so much, my friend! I really am glad that you liked it, as it felt good to write. I just have to write what this ol' gypsy heart tells me to. So glad to see you here!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Sunny this was writen from the heart and it shows~ sincere and delightful  )If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Tori.. Yes, it did come from the heart as a message of sincerity. I thank you for your most kind reply, and glad that you stopped by to read it!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is a lovely poem, filled with hope and promise. Just perfect. Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi cat.... I'm glad that you liked this one, as it was written from the heart. Hope and promise are so elusive, aren't they? Thank you. my dear friend....... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is a fabulous piece of writing, Sunny. I can feel the magic! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Chanson... Ahhhhh.....then my spell worked! I'm glad you could pick up on the magic that I cast on this.......and glad you came by to read and reply! Thank you so much!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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