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My Curdling Halloween (for challenge) LJ Yoohoo
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My Curdling Halloween (for challenge) LJ Yoohoo |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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 Made me a nervous wreck. The shreiks came out so eerily The hair stood on my neck. For two years straight I've heard that sound That stood my hair on end. And, when I walked home late tonight I heard it once again. Real scared, I stopped and looked around There's nothing I could see. A cold chill then ran up my spine There's something touching me. I froze there for a moment, then I quickly spun around. My knees were shaking terribly My voice would make no sound. I felt a cold and clammy hand Brush up against my face. But when I looked into the eyes There was a vacant space. Two gaping holes where eyes once were My blood froze in my veins. That's when I got a real good look At what's called Long John's brains. There was this green slime oozing out And dripping through his eyes. Those eerie shreiks I heard that night Were Long John's pitiful cries.  [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 09-29-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Starting out naughty this morning? rofl...thanks for the smiles...loved it! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh......this one is perfect!!! I'm sure LJ will love it too!! Great morning reading!!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Karen! I couldn't resist when I saw "Things that go bump in the night." This is a repost way back from #3. hehe Sunny glad you enjoyed it! Thanks  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
brains but no eyes??? I always thought I had eyes, and no brains when it came to women. lol - Great poem... expect a response worthy of you, Rebecca. smooches |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rebecca, Whitedove blood curdling write looking at LJA would give anyone a fright If you see through the mask so sensitive and true you see a little boy waiting to shout boo I'm not surprised you heard him moaning and a wailing he was trying to match Lorelei and was badly failing. Keth. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rebecca~ ROFLMAO!!!! This is too fun! - SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LJ both being green I could have mistaken it! LOL I will await for your rebuttal!  Thanks Kethry and Susan! Glad you got a kick out of it, I know I have one coming |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Angel ROFL, this is great!!! wooohoooo loved! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
WhtDove, WooHoo green goo ! Doc |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Angel!  glad you got a laugh.Moose yea, green goo! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... great poem Rebecca, loved the flow ... and loved the ending! A wonderfully eery read, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Glad you liked it Kit! Thanks |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
ROTFLMAO Becky.....  This is GREAT!!!!! Grabbed on and held me from start to finish. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ Can't wait for Trick or Treat ! This is really, really neat ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL I remember this one from last Halloween! Very good, Rebecca! Thanks for reposting it!Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Bonnie! Glad it grabbed ya. Actually this came from some truth. Tell ya about it sometime. Marge thanks for poppin in and reading Thanks Denise! Glad you could enjoy this again. I had forgotten all about it. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
EEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW......... I'm envisioning poor LJA with green goo pouring out all over...  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
But Nan! LJ looks good in green goo |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
ROFL ... nicely nasty Loved it |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
ROTFL Great read! Great writing! |
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