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Kethry
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0 posted 2000-11-16 07:11 AM


Well Balladeer loves fishes
What a nice surprise
I'm sure that they love him too
When they see his soleful eyes

All the day spent on a lake
With his rod in water
Just to get a piece of flake
More wrinkled than it oughta

Up within the early morn
To cast a line or fly
Whispering in the glistening dawn
Some bigger fish to fry

Balladeer loves to fish
And he simply says he learns
That when the ranger comes around
He's merely drowning worms


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-11-16 07:17 AM


Kethry~
Such a delightful chuckle to start the day.
What a kindhearted kinda guy,
Balladeer told me he was giving swimming lessons to minnows !

Your quick sense of humor is enlightening.
~*Marge*~



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Nan
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2 posted 2000-11-16 07:34 AM


I think all the worms in southern Florida saw him coming and headed north...



More likely, that's what he's doing with all those big roaches he's exterminating...


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3 posted 2000-11-16 08:15 AM


*LOL*.......  


Charisma
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4 posted 2000-11-16 08:17 AM


*LOL*.......  

love the imagery you give us....still laughing....

Charisma

oooopssss.....sorry posted twice....*lol*...


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Kethry
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5 posted 2000-11-17 02:38 AM


Marge, thanks for responding to my riposte for Balladeer.

Nan, thanks, love the graphics

Charisma, thanks loved the graphics
oops posted that twice.
Be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

peppermint35
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6 posted 2000-11-17 03:01 AM


How fun; to come in and read this...now I have a big smile on my face!!!  

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Kethry
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7 posted 2000-11-17 05:08 AM


pepper,
thanks, I'm glad it made you smile.
Be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Eilidh
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8 posted 2000-11-17 06:56 AM


Loves this poem.  And the



"There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon

Eilidh
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9 posted 2000-11-17 07:11 AM


and this one too  

Corinne
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10 posted 2000-11-17 09:11 AM


Hiarious!  Loved the double entandre of "his rod in the water," too!

Corinne

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11 posted 2000-11-17 09:51 AM


Loved the read and the grapics...

Miss everyone here!

Kethry
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12 posted 2000-11-17 03:38 PM


Eilidh,
thanks for stopping by and the double dos of graphics.

Corrine, Thanks for noticing the double entendre.

Lorelei, Get that fishy tale back here RIGHT NOW!
Be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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