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Sunshine's Haiku challenge . . . response #2
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Sunshine's Haiku challenge . . . response #2 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now for the other gauntlet ~ Her instinct fulfilled The salmon has laid her eggs Now life continues < !signature--> Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Are you sure I'm not right about the lullaby? Is this supposed to be a mini series haiku.. I think this one is a little better than the first...both are very good!...ethome |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
rainbow trout glisten flashing brilliant in the sun casting flies alight Well done Sir! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ethome ~ A mini-series? Why didn't I think of that? Maybe I WILL improve with practice. Think? Sunshine ~ Two-upped. Double shux! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how do you think of these so fast?! This is wonderful, maybe I'll get the hubby to take me fishing this weekend  -SEA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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