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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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If i could sail the northern seas < !signature-->and you were my seafaring viking i would sail in your majestic ship swab the deck..if that was your liking if you were my Sea God Oceanus i would be your ocean nypth and explore the depths of your sea where winding rivers flow in the sunshine and tides of blue i would be faithful to you until a hungry whale doth swallows us i would follow..follow you... A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Woe is me!....I have no boat....got a canoe.. and a lake close by....all hands on paddles.. this is a really fun poem full of imagination, I don't know whether I'd be looking for that whale to come along I'm sure both of us doth not want to be swallowed... good stuff!! Victoria...ethome |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is a wonderful way to let someone know that you would do anything to be with them. But some people may wonder if you are STALKING someone. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, This is remarkable, and so much truth in what you write. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ethome..i like posting fun ones..so glad you liked..nice to hear from you as always..  inot2b..i dont think a man would complain if a nymph was stalking him haa..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much JD..nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is the best I have seen of your work! It gave me a real feeling. Keep going, my friend, keep going! P.S. I love your new picture! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thanks Rosemary..glad you enjoyed..almost didnt post this one ha..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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