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When Nature Calls....... |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Stepping out the door today, The dog thought he could have his way, I had his collar in my hand, But soon I found I could not stand. The deck was covered with fresh snow, But this big dog, he had to go, So off he ran and down I went, Landing on that hard cement. Bathrobe up around my ears, My eyes were filling up with tears, And just as I got to my feet, A cat came by for Bo to meet. He took off running once again, And back I'm down where I had been, Sliding in the slushy snow, In my jammies don't ya know. Down the driveway to the street, When the neighbor man I meet, Who wondered if my mind was right, For big ol' Bo was outta sight. And I was sitting in the snow, Blushing with a bright red glow, Robe and jammies wet and torn, Revenge is mine tomorrow morn. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Why is it I can see this happening to me too easily?! This is so cute! Great job, I was right there with you!  -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Been there, done that, and if you're going to be a dog owner...or owned by a dog...you're going to do it again! Great LOL...thanks! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Read this earlier, but got to laughing then choking on my coffee, before I could comment my computer said enough and disconnected. Thanks for the image, it got the blood flowing to the brain. (I hope) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
lmao--this brought back memories..thanks for the hearty laugh this morning. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
ROFL...this is sooooooo funny...yeppers I can see it all  And Congrats on 2000 Bonnie |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I wonder if your neighbor is gonna look at you funny everytime he sees you now? I sure hope not! this was so funny....I hope that dog of yours appreciates you! Love, Ellie Congrats on 2,000 from me too! Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ROFLMAO.....oh I can see you, and can't stop laughing....*lol* love that dog that give us this great imagery. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BSC, Well done. Great to see some good humour. Take care next time. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Bonnie!! Ha ha I can just visualize you in your jammies and sittin in the snow... a sense of humour sure helps make the world a better place to be...you did such a great job on this one I just loved it...give Bo a pat for me or I would'nt have been able to have this laugh.....ethome |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bonnie--It is a trate of grace to be able to laugh at yourself...now I know why I have a small dog. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
SEA ~ Glad to have you along...it was quite a "trip!" Karilea ~ Ya'd think I'd learn wouldn't ya! inot2b ~ Sorry you choked...but glad it got your blood flowing...darn dog... kitkat ~ Aren't memories great, glad you got a chuckle. BDC ~ Glad you liked, and thanks for the congrats! Ellie ~ I'm sure the neighbor will remember, and he'll share it with others too....thank you too for the congratulations. Charisma ~ Big giggles huh....ya just gotta love that dog! Daniel ~ Trust me, I will take care, I'll wear boots with lots of tread next time! ethome ~ Poor shredded jammies....Gave Bo a big pat for ya...glad you enjoyed. Martie ~ It would be a sad, sad world around here if I didn't laugh at myself...Guess maybe I should get a smaller dog! Thanks you all so much for reading and replying, it means alot to me. Bonnie [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ You tell the tale with such delight - I can just bet you were a sight. In robe and jammies sitting there I can just see the neighbor's stare And then there is the sight of Bo Waiting for a chance to make yellow snow !  LOL ! LOL ! Hey ... Congratulations on the 2000th post ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i know we had to there to see this..but better you than me haa...  a funny one bonnie..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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