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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-14 08:31 PM


finding in her heart
the essence of gentleness
our hearts find a home

in her words of life
she shares a love that still knows
still knows that first touch

she is this and more
and in our hearts we still feel
that gentle of love

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-14 08:33 PM


all that, and more...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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2 posted 2000-11-14 09:18 PM


A beautiful tribute to one of our best poets!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



inot2B
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3 posted 2000-11-14 09:36 PM


Sven, you have told about one very gentle spirit.She is not the only one who has that special touch. You sir are one Special Poet.
Victoria
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4 posted 2000-11-14 11:14 PM


another lovely tribute  sven...she will love this ..

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


tracie66
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5 posted 2000-11-15 02:49 AM


Sven
Wonderful poem....tender piece Sven
she will love this  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



peppermint35
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6 posted 2000-11-15 02:55 AM


Indeed, another great work

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

peppermint35
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7 posted 2000-11-15 02:55 AM


Indeed, another great work

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Kethry
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8 posted 2000-11-15 05:26 AM


Sir Sven,
but soft ... how this one speaks!
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Sven
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9 posted 2000-11-15 12:28 PM


Thank you all my friends for your wonderful words. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


juliet_2u
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10 posted 2000-11-15 08:27 PM


Sven this is to tender. I'm sure she will be very proud. Well done sir.
Juls

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11 posted 2000-11-16 08:40 PM


Oh sir Sven, so noble and true
all this and more, such a friend as you....

Thank you for the lovely words you write, and
for the wonderful welcome to Passions.  I am glad that my busy schedule allowed me a moment to breeze through, I would have been devastated to have missed this.  
Thank you.....


On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.



ethome
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12 posted 2000-11-16 08:45 PM


Very nice Sven...tender and warm words for your friend..this is a real nice series you are writing and doing a superb job at it.
Sven
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13 posted 2000-11-16 11:28 PM


Juls, thank you. . .

ethome, glad that you are enjoying it. . .

GS, thank you my friend for your words. . . they have spoken to me like your name. . . gently. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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14 posted 2004-06-06 07:52 PM


just beautiful
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