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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Somewhere deep inside me divorced from the everyday there's a dam of emotions secluded castrated untouchable the surface reflects nothing reveals nothing is placid calm unbroken until... a word, a deed, a view shatters the dam triggers the slip moves the boundaries and thereupon poetry gushes forth erupting spewing cascading spectators passing gaze in wonder at beauty abounding a cornucopia of bliss it then withdraws to the secret place silent stilled stifled and so do I... Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well I'm glad that you let the dam break here at passions and let your feelings go because I for one enjoy the mental vision I am painting of "a cornucopia of bliss" and think that I'd like to hear of you in that state as often as possible...wonderful little gem this poem!!...take care...ethome.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, this is beautiful, what a wonderful vision of a cascade of delight, showering words of awsome beauty. I love this one, and this is yet another of your beautious hearts poems. Love this one. Take care Slushy Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what has come from your fountain so far my friend has been wonderful. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I love the way this just pulled you from begining to end...wonderful work! jwesley |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Kethry, Terrific flow, cascading thoughts. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Kethry, < !signature-->I love the images this created......fountains of poetic bliss!! Yes, girl......you did good!!  Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kethry* This was woven with the heart of a poet...this flowed freely from beginning to end, great work~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and so we all are, Kethry, filled with poetry just waiting for any small occurence to bring it gushing out in gimlets! Love the thoughts....  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kethry, This was a beautiful piece my friend. May the words and thoughts always flow freely from your fountain. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Once again....a wonderful treat to read Indeed, may your fountain of poetry continue to produce such as this!!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
it then withdraws to the secret place silent stilled stifled and so do I... ..... WOW, a thunderous applause... for the poetic fountain... and another wonderful one from you, O Kethry... regards, sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! Keth love your poetic fountain keep it flowing my friendLove Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone, given that my poetry is as old as me I think this poetic fountain must contain the elixer of youth for I always feel younger after writing. Maybe that's because i cry like a baby everytime one of my poems leave. Balladeer. "Gushing out in gimlets?" Are you saying I'm boring or screwed? Either way *laughs.* Be well everybody Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Your poetic fountain bubbles with delight. Enjoyed your splash ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Marge, I hope you didn't get wet. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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