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Love's Medley (vandana's challenge)
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Love's Medley (vandana's challenge) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
OK, guys. This is my first attempt at a challenge, so please bear with me! Here goes: Love's Medley Seems these days Every song is inspiring; I wear a constant smile. This quiet night Belongs to reverie-- Only to those fantasies Of you and me, Alone on this cloud I've discovered. I see something deeper In your eyes; I could swear I recognized some emotion In your voice. There’s something in your eyes That has captured my heart. You are beautiful; No lack of inspiration Can change that. Believe me, Love, You are the unparalleled find In their search for perfection. I know I have other things I should be tending to, But I'm a sucker For romance. For when the muse Seems to be Nowhere in sight, I am proven wrong The moment I lay eyes On your beautiful face. Though the storm clouds Bring in those overused expressions, Everyday brings me A new meaning, Because, when you looked at me With those beautiful, soul-searching eyes, My heart melted away With just a glance. I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful, the love in this carries your emotions right along To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
sp, Challenge well met. Nice work for your first time. The love shines through.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
dreamkeeper: thanks! glad you liked it!! LW: thank you! I'm glad you could stop by!  sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SP~ this is a *SIGH* kinda poem.....I loved it -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is great snowpants. . . a walk through your work. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Nicely done. You pulled it together well. VanDana will be proud of you. Thanks for taking her up on it and meeting the challenge. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris-- this is my favorite of yours. i have a love of music to begin with but combined with your poetic grace and the beauty of your words and i'm the "sucker". ya got me big time with this one. take care my friend. ~amy~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
SEA: I am honored to receive a *SIGH* for this one! Thanks! Sven: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! Marge: thanks! Those words mean a lot! I'm glad you liked it!! Amy: awww, now. Stop. Really, my dear friend. You flatter me. I appreciate your kind reply, as always!  sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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