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Play Me .............my 1000th
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Play Me .............my 1000th |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Play Me Play me, Please! Just one more time This broken heart you know so well Show me the hope of what this love may be Let me feel that magic of your spell Play for me those dulcet tones Let me feel them echo through my mind Offering sweet smile and soft caress With never a thought to that left behind Let me hear those strained and soulful sounds That gentle touch of love's sweet refrain As I close these eyes and drift away Make me feel alive, take away this pain Strum your fingers gently across this soul And caress this lonely spirit once more This heart cries out for that tortured song Dreams now shattered lay prone on the floor As this soul reverberates with your tune so fine Please tell me again, that it was meant to be Play again that sweet song, one last encore Can you hear me cry out, please! Play me! < !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Eagle, Felicitations on 1000th post and my compliments to you on this touching write.  Coco |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ooooh Eddie, I would play you forever and never let you go, never damage your frame and we could make beautiful music together. Congratulations on the 1000th may there be many more just as beautiful as this. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eddie: Congratulations on your 1000th post! this poem is beautiful.....absolutely beautiful! You have such talents bello - keep them coming - Much love Roniece [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
EagleOne...you know...this is beautiful...so very sad...Play you? No...it sure wouldnt be a game...Congratulations Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh I do know this tune well, Eagle...sigh. A beautiful post for your 1000 milestone, congratulations, and I do intend to be reading your work more often. I like!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Congrats my friend!!! I love this poem...Each time I read one of your works I see you grow and reach to the feelings that you don't often go to and each time you do you writing hits a new level. Awesome to see you here at 1000...and now without a doubt...even you have to admit it...You are a Poet hmmmmmm I think I hear an "I told ya so" in there somewhere  Once again...Congrats my Friend!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Congratulations on writing a wonderful poem and on acheiving the 1000 milestone!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Congrats on your 1000th Eagle and a very good one at that....."strum your fingers across this soul...and caress this lonely spirit once more." this sure is great writing and pulls the title right into place...Play Me... good show! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A passionate plea so beautifully expressed and a great poem to celebrate the big 1000 Congratulations on the thousand and on your fine poetry Liz |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Eddie, Congratulations on 1000, this is a marvellous poem, really terrific. I love this one. It's so well written, well done. Take care Mushy Marsha Here's to the next million cheers!  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((WARM HUGE HUG)) you have marked your 1000th post with an excellent poem.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((WARM HUGE HUG)) you have marked your 1000th post with an excellent poem.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Eagle-- this was so beautiful yet a little sad as well. i definitely could relate to this piece. congratulations on 1000! i would like to take a moment and let you know i think you are an awesome poet. you have an amazing gift to write. simply beautiful work! also thank you for your many kind replies to my work. it means a lot! take care. ~amy~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Congratulations mr shy guy ha.. an awesome poem..you should write more often Eddie.. loved it..~Victoria~ < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ You are such a pleasure to read ! The soft beauty of this piece just sets a mood of serenity ... within your heart it rests well. Congratulations, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Coco.....Thankyou for your always kind comments. Kethry.......thankyou so much for that lovely reply. Roniece....Where do I start my friend? How do I thank you? Without you I would not have discoverd Passions, or myself. No doubt it was fate that you chose this day to start posting again. Paula......Thankyou for you comments, glad you liked this one. serenity.....Perhaps it is a poets tune! Your comments are always appreciated, thankyou! Butterfly......So, you like uh!! It is your friendship, and your always biased comments , that has helped me to grow. I doubt I have the words to fully express my appreciation to you. I thank you, take care my friend!Poet deVine.....you honour me with your comments, thankyou! ethome......Thankyou so much for your adding your thoughts. Elizabeth......when it comes to fine poetry I'm not even in your leauge. Thanks! Marsha......your comments are far too kind, you'll have me blushing. Charisma......thankyou for the colourful reply, and the hugs. Amy......it's always a little special to know that I have reached people with my writing. Thankyou so much for your kind words. Victoria.....my work is humbled when compared to yours, thankyou for your comments. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marge......it is a pleasure to have you read and enjoy my rambles, thankyou so much! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
The Eagle has landed. Well done, you have written a beautifully orchestrated piece here. I hear violins sad, melodic and vibrant all at the same time. Absolutely wonderful. And congrats on 1,000. Wish you the best. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Congrads on the 1000th post, wonderfully penned poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Play for me those dulcet tones Let me feel them echo through my mind Offering sweet smile and soft caress With never a thought to that left behind Let me hear those strained and soulful sounds That gentle touch of love's sweet refrain As I close these eyes and drift away Make me feel alive, take away this pain ============== WOW..what an outstanding offering to mark your milestone post!!! CONGRATS poet sir... and this poem is awesome... so many emotions expressed with the metaphors of music and tortured love.. yeppers ..its official...your da poet from down under excellent writing Eagle later-play-me-gator jm |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
As a music lover, I want my guitar! Where is it? I know it's around here somewhere! I really enjoyed this, it gave me a lift this evening, and I really needed it. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ron.....yes, there was a lot of conflicting emotion in this. Always nice to know when the intended feeling gets across. Thanks! Brian....always a pleasure to heve you stop in. Janet......It's always a pleasure to know you have enjoyed my work. Your comments and friendship are valued, thanks! and take care! Kathleen...I am a fan of your work so it is an honour to know you enjoyed mine, thanks! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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