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Shangri-La Just Up The Road
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Shangri-La Just Up The Road |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Shangri-La Just Up The Road Just up the road is Shangri-La so I’ve been told. So many pass my way to utopia on the highway of love, aura’s glowing with loves sweet embrace. Walks of life, race nor creed hold wedge between loves firm grip, so simple it appears finding treasured realm of love, it’s as if they found the maps and keys to paradise’s front gates. Passing my way they freely share their story’s filled with passions tenderly shared, moments of doubt, troublesome times, but never a second did their love for each other waver. They conveyed, keeping eyes straight ahead and hearts open, their dreams and hopes kept them always moving forward towards the Shangri-La in their hearts. The common thread I found was the hope they possessed, strong, firmly planted in their hearts and nothing would have the power to take it away. Changing my dreams and hopes from the imaginary realm, into a reality strong enough to conquer that which keeps me from my hearts most wanted treasure to be truly loved. BY, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cerenity, If I say excellent it doesn't go nearly far enough to explaining how I feel aobut this poem. So I will say it's splendiferuous and dazzling. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Oh ... to be in Shangri La ! 'The common thread I found was the hope they possessed' What a weave it is, this common thread - for with it much hope lies straight ahead. Love ya', gal.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kethry and Marge, Thank you so very much for your kind thoughts, and Kethry I love that word and will now use frequently, I am missing you, hope all is well, thank you both again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just show me the way Cerenity!!! Wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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