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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2000-11-10 11:08 PM


I met you in a bar
You stood next to me
I could feel your eyes upon me
Even though my back was turned
I'm so pleased you smiled and said hello
Now we have a friendship
A wonderful, delightful friendship
You and I ..... oh how well that sits with my heart
I hope this feeling lasts forever, my forever friend

© Copyright 2000 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Highlander
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since 2000-11-06
Posts 50
Dundee, Scotland
1 posted 2000-11-10 11:13 PM


A friend is a most valuable gift, and a friend forever is rare.

Andrew

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-11-10 11:17 PM


I've no doubt Roniece that this friend
cherishes you as much as you do them...and
when friendship is treated like this....well
there is never a time limit on
it...beautiful thoughts~

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2000-11-10 11:50 PM


I knew it was a good day Roniece when I saw your first post, now you have another the day just gets better.   I smile knowing you have this friendship.   Take care my friend!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2000-11-10 11:52 PM


i'm glad for once that no more was needed. good job
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2000-11-11 12:21 PM


Highlander:  I agree the gift of a friend is special enough - I'm blessed to have some special friends in my life too!   Roniece

Butterflies:  oh  my, another wonderful response from you - thank you bella!   Roniece

Eddie: Thank you bello xx

wayoutwalt:  thank you   Roniece


[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 11-11-2000).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2000-11-11 12:25 PM


Roneice,
this is the first piece of your work I've read. I'm sure it won't be the last. good writing and great sentiment. Brava.
Be well
Kethry.


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2000-11-11 12:33 PM


Kethry:  Millie grazie per suo nota!   I have been absent from Passions for a little while - too long I think! My good friend EagleOne is overjoyed to see me back! LOL
I will look forward to reading your work too - thank you   Roniece

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
8 posted 2000-11-11 02:21 AM


Such a treasure, both the thoughts of that kind of friendship (a rare jewel) and the way you've written of it

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass


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