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Walk With Me.
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Walk With Me. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Walk With Me. ~~Daniel J D~~ Take my hands I have been there before Let me show you how to explore The road where happiness abounds Bring a smile along As we join in a dance together Close to each other In that street we belong There are no pressures No keys, no time for failures It is a path I have tread Where a history of love has spread An alley where there are no tears Pain is far away and no one fears Let me take your nightmares Show you real angels on white mares Rivers so clear, mountains covered with trees Children with flowers covered to their knees Singing joyful tunes of love and harmony Birds with colours of rainbows soaring in unity Hold my hands as I walk with you On the freshness of the morning dew As the nightingale welcomes our presence In the street where love is the essence Let me carry you along the path of real dreams Together we shall rest and reclaim Years, lost in the depths of despair An abyss, so unkind an unfair Let us rejoin our bodies on the gardens Of this avenue where only angels opens The doors of true and eternal love. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ this is lovely..........soft and warm  -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love the transition of your work to hope...Daniel, this is lovely...a tendernous of thought and word. I applaud you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
DJD~ Kudos! This is so tender, loving, full of hope, and sigh....so beautiful Well done. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Thank you so much. I hope this one made you feel a little better. Cheer up. Serenity, Thank you, the road of happiness can be hard to find. We must always strive hard to locate it. Gentle Spirit, Thank you so much. It is comforting to know that life can be better. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ 'Take my hands I have been there before' Nothing more reassuring than to hold another's hand ... This is just the loveliest of verse, full of tenderness and optimism. Wonderfully said, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, Appreciating your words at all times. Thank you so very much. Yes to hold on to another who has been troubled is a gift we can all offer. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Ahh! Breathtakingly beautiful poetry! Superb. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I love this one....sounds so peaceful and romantic......I would love to walk there too. I love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Compassion, Thank you, and keep up the good work. Charisma, I am glad you enjoyed this one. At times we need a hand to walk along. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Daniel-- this is one of the most beautiful poems i've ever read. your words flow on the paper with such ease and i really found myself lost in the midst of your words. what a wonderful picture you paint with your lovely words. my heart you did steal  take care. ~amy~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Aimster, Thank you so much, I am honoured to obtain such wonderful words from you. The walks we often take during our lifetime can at some stage be difficult. I certainly hope this makes a few people feel comfortable. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
soft smooth and romantic poetry very good! ........ethome.... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautiful words and a beautiful verse at the bottom too..Enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel...to walk this walk would be a gift and a treasure... |
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