»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #10
»
The Silent Wish
| Open Poetry #10 |
|
The Silent Wish |
|
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
|
 ~The Silent Wish~ A certain smile with the look of love, whispers unspoken words the moment I see you a fleeting glance says, we'll dance this dance of chance, under the magic of moonlight seasons of waiting are through, as long as I have you let me be the one to hear the silent wish you make BloomingRose |
||
| © Copyright 2000 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ahhh, *sigh*,...Gorgeous! *Peace. |
||
|
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
some lovely thoughts here very nicely done  Rex |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
exquisite BR..very lovely take care jm |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ This is really quite lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Does it ever get any better? I think not...this is so truely lovely. Wonderful penning from you. |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That look that connects two people is quite amazing isn't it? Somehow they just know and it's a wonderful feeling....this is really good I enjoyed it very much I like the idea it's truly a poetic one!! |
||
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Spitfire~ Thank you glad you enjoyed, guess it's one of those rose's and romance days lol Rex~ Thank you, for your nice comment JM~ Thank you, glad you like it Marge~ Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it Mark~ Thanks for your warm comments, glad you like ethome~ Thank you. I agree, a certain look speaks a thousand words |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- this is so beautiful. i like it much. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
||
|
ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
||
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Vicky~ I am glad you enjoyed, and thanks for stopping by to read Thunder~ Thank you much! |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Deb* This is so delicately woven with the love and devotion that rests within your heart...very beautiful~ |
||
|
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
BR-- a poem full of much peace and love, this is! your heart shines through in this one and i just love the view... "we'll dance this dance of chance, under the magic of moonlight" *sigh* this is very beautiful! take care. ~amy~ |
||
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Butterflies~ Thank you so much for your kind words Amy~ Most of us chance the dance of love. Thank you for reading, I am glad you like this one |
||
|
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BloomingRose, Wow! How I wish these words were meant for me. So beautiful and meaningful. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
||
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Deb, Wonderful writing. This was lovely. May your dance last a lifetime my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
