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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
His breath envelopes me... into tender caress His eyes embrace me... into depths of soul undressed His lips devour me... into bliss of untold fantasy His arms unfold me... into dreams of passionate ecstasy His heart loves me... into eternity a rhythm beating strong.  Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tender...delicate and sooooo very beautiful CoCo...I enjoyed this very much! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You've got rhythm, I've got music. He's got his girl, who could ask for anything more? Love is. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
His eyes embrace me... into depths of soul undressed Enjoyed CoCo.. very romantic..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Coco hang onto that guy...he has rhythm for sure..James |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautiful write coco. Enjoyed immencely. Rich |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOOOOHHHH baby... I like the rhythm of your rhyme  Coco this is a sweet song of harmony and sensual melodies you have penned... love your cadence ... play it again my friend ... later-you rock-gator jm |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ this is so beautiful...gentle touches of love -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ Oh my ... how lovely this is ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Coco, I LOVE that line - "..into depths of soul undressed.." Well done! A sensual dance set to words of love. - Jeff |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear it now Coco. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
indeed such is love~ beautiful~ Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thank you treasured PoetFriends, for your kindness in replies Coco |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah yes who wouldnt enjoy the rhythm of love expressed so beautifully? lovely lovely write |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Coco- this is absolutely beautiful. i really love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
a wonderful rhytm of love....love it and enjoyed reading this piece of love. well done. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I can feel the rhythm of the heartdrum, and hear the music in your thoughts!! This is beautiful, as is all that you write, my friend!!  Follow your dream! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I got my ear into this one and it is enchanting...very very good!! |
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