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Ron K. Fox
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0 posted 2000-11-04 10:43 PM


I’ve just been witness to the vision of an angel
As pure as an ethereal snowflake untouched
Drifting among the winter winds unhindered
As beautiful
      as the firstborn rose of spring blossoming    
A blush of cheek glowing radiantly within the garden
As perfect as Heaven’s varicolored summer sunset
Which leaves you in awe,
      pining for yet another and another
As brilliant as an blazing array
      of autumn hillside splashes
Dazzling the eye,
      leaving you speechless and breathless
A vision that I have witnessed only once before.
‘Twas in a dream
And now I view this image once more
Although, I am not in sleep’s grip now.



[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-04-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-04 11:13 PM


This is breathtaking, Ron! Very beautiful!

Denise

Balladeer
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2 posted 2000-11-04 11:19 PM


Where are you, Ron? Mail that address.....quick!!!!! Thank you...
kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
3 posted 2000-11-05 01:58 AM


Oh this was so lovely. Made my heart flutter.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
4 posted 2000-11-05 03:28 AM


Ron, I'm starting to worry about you...all these angels your seeing!! ...think maybe you and Ball ben looking at to many magazines, girly books..somethng (smiles)          Marcy
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-11-05 03:34 AM


I'm with Balladeer, Where is this place?  Wowzeers my friend.....care to share the vision just a little more IN DETAIL ... LOL?
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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6 posted 2000-11-05 03:37 AM


cool beans is a mature way to say i likes this and i am there cuz i got two tickets two paradise yuh yuh dont get me singing
Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

7 posted 2000-11-05 11:05 AM


Dee--thank you. you are very inspirational when it comes to expressing the beauty in love

Balladeer- Do i look like I was born yesterday? How would I out fox a deer?

Kitkat...thank you for stopping by...take a deep breath...

Marcy---I'm shocked...You should know we only buy them for the great articles they have in them!

Mark--you're back, glad to hear from you again, say hi to your sis, and I'll tell Ball to send you the mag when he's finished

Walt---one way or round trip?




Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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