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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-11-04 09:03 PM



Pink Ribboned Thoughts
~*Marge Tindal*~
  
Tie me up in neat little piles
entwined with pink ribboning of yesterdays remember
Tuck me far away in a corner of the cedar chest
or perhaps a corner of your mind

Read me again when you are lonely
or perhaps right now
Smile a wistful smile
knowing I am untying
blue ribboned thoughts of you






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2000-11-04 09:13 PM


Don't ever start a poem with "tie me up", MArge, while I'm awake.....please!! I can resist anything but tempataion!!!!
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2 posted 2000-11-04 09:17 PM


LOL !

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3 posted 2000-11-04 09:59 PM


Great poem, love it!
Sandra

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4 posted 2000-11-04 11:03 PM


Marge,
A very sweet poem, as sweet as you are. Well done!

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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5 posted 2000-11-04 11:09 PM


warming smiles at BOTH you and 'Deer....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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6 posted 2000-11-04 11:11 PM


This is lovely, Marge! Definitely brought me a smile!

Denise

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Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2000-11-05 01:27 AM


Smiles all round Marge! This is delightful, brought back some blue ribboned memories for me.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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8 posted 2000-11-05 04:07 AM


Marge, smiling at both you and 'Deer.
A charming write. I love it.
BTW I thought it was going to be seriously written piece about cancer awareness.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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9 posted 2000-11-05 04:11 AM


prettilicious yuh yuh
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10 posted 2000-11-05 04:23 AM


CatalinaMoon~
Thank you.  
Just plundering through the attic.

JD~
*blushing* and thanking you.

Karilea~
Love that smile !

Denise~
That's my other job ... spreading smiles !

EagleOne~
My mission is a smile on every face.
Glad yours is covered.

Kethry~
Thank you, hon.
And the fact that you came on in and read it
says something wonderful about you !

Walt~
*Hugs* to you, sweet poet.
~*Marge*


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Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2000-11-05 04:31 AM


May I tie you up in the corner of my heart instead of tucking you away in a cedar chest?  Or should I just simply tie you to the bedpost(next to the cedar chest?)
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2000-11-05 04:38 AM


Oh my, Cowboy !
The things you can do with a rope !
You just lassoed my heart !

Does your filly lose her flavor
tied to the bedpost overnight ?  
You'll just have to keep practicing
until you get it right !

~*Marge*~


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13 posted 2000-11-05 04:43 AM


Oh Marge what lovely thoughts   This is so cute and descriptive
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2000-11-05 10:04 AM


Tracie~
Thank you for visiting and enjoying.
You're just always there and I appreciate you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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