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We're Not Different
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We're Not Different |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
We're not really so different Though it seems that we are It's just that you're oblivious To what's going on here For us on this side Seems like chaos is winning For you over there Seem numbed to that shame Don't you feel the pain Are you going too fast Caught up in yourselves In your own personal rat trap Are you really too busy To listen a while Have you developed blindness To the needs that cry out It's not that we're different You versus me It's just that you're crippled Because you won't see It's never too late To open your eyes Look all around you See where beauty abides Now is the time For all of us here To join as one family To conquer the fears I can't help but love you You may not know why When I look at your soul I see me inside you < !signature--> Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Are you really too busy To listen a while Have you developed blindness To the needs that cry out' Wow, pepper! definitely thought-provoking! Great write! sp  Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
peppermint35 - many thoughtful words spoken here in your writing. I pray that things go well for you. Bill |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
If only people would stop listening to themselves just for a little while, and try to listen to the thoughts and needs of those around them. Communication won't work if someone doesn't listen! Great poem!!  Follow your dream! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper, this is a really amazing poem, full of thoughts and questions. I really admire your work here, it's sooooooo goood. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Excellent, Pepper. Very thoughtful poem. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peppermint~ 'I can't help but love you You may not know why When I look at your soul I see me inside you.' Deep thoughts ... well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Pepper, this is very thought provoking. An excellent poem. Great read. This one tops it all.So may great lines. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you all for stopping and reading and for your comments...I was thinking on how we all seem so disconnected from each other sometimes...the differences are played up too much, but deep inside, we're all the same....don't know if I quite got that feeling out or not...but that's what I was trying for. Thank you again, for your kind words, much appreciated  Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's not what makes us different. . . it's what makes us the same. . . Great poem Pepper. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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