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Easing Out
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Easing Out |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Easing Out Each day, as the time I hold in my hand turns over, another memory, eases out of my pores. I sweat the hurt and pain, wipe my brow and the tears from my edges. As the day continues I wearily rest my dreams, bookmark the last words of the day placing them back on the shelf, where they shall collect the moondust. And when the indigo calls, my thoughts will open their pages, devour their words, kiss the night's lips, slowly easing into your touch, until the morning myst, shall awaken me in dew time. ~Wynter |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is a very thought-provoking write; easing out the pain and the memories. Hugs, Pepper Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely written NT...enjoyed as always..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A beautiful view of how you pen your feelings. Thank you for a peek into your pages. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Peppermint- yes somedays I wonder where my words come from... Victoria- my friend, I am always happy to see you in the pink.  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Whoops, I almost forgot you Ron, you can peek in my pages anytime... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow, not only is this a lovely look into your pages but a wonderful glimpse at the wanderings of your muse through the challenge of night bringing into the day the hopes of memories sweet and dreams looking for a place to be written. Loved it much. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Why Mark, I love how you respond so thoughtfully. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
bookmark the last words of the day placing them back on the shelf, where they shall collect the moondust. And when the indigo calls, my thoughts will open their pages, devour their words, kiss the night's lips, slowly easing into your touch, until the morning myst, shall awaken me in dew time. ============== this is SO COOL.. what a excellent piece of poetry... that last verse is of poetic perfection wonderful writing Wynter and perfect title... very cool indeed. take care jm |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
janet Marie- you make me blush with your compliments this morning. Thank you for reading ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely. Easing out..More like struggling, but I have the feeling, too. Your writing is always very meaningful. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoy your company, too Sandra ...thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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