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Say My Name
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Say My Name |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
If I'm the one your heart beats for Then tell me that its so If you love me say my name Tell the world I'm not a dream Instead, that I'm the one you live for Nows the time to proclaim, to profess, to exclaim That yes, here she is my one true love Say my name call it loud No more hiding no more doubts Its time to dance to sing our song No more pain no more fear No better way to let me know than to Say my name. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ I SO like this........make him say it LOUD!!  Or on a wimper would be cool too (sorry)  Awesome!  -SEA |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
I like this ruff stuff huh. I'm sure he'll say it soon very nice Rich |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Good luck Paula......I am sure he will say it soon |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Paula, I am quite sure that he will say your name soon....well done ((hugs))) Charisma |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Paula, I love this one, and I know how you feel about wanting to hear a ferm yes you are the one, I wish you the best, very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Paula* This is so beautiful...exactly what you deserve and each of us wants...sing it from the rooftops....excellent work~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That's the spirit Paula! Make him SCREAM IT. You know, sort of like Marlon Brando's "STE-LLA!" Nice work. I sincerely hope everything works out for you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...LMAO...whimper huh? Not real sure I want a guy who whimpers... spiked...you like it RUFF huh...let me get out my cuffs...hehehe...well he will hear...someday Alan...lol well maybe when there is someone to hear...thanks Charisma...thanks for the hugs...Im ok really...and someday the right one will hear Cerenity...yep...no wishy washy stuff...lol...thanks Holly...yes what I deserve...and someday hope to find Serenity...wonderful image that...Brando screaming...one of these days it will be me |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
fantastic poem Paula, proclamation is affirmation! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
better yet, ask him to whisper it....oh boy!< !signature--> "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
This is wonderful. I love the message and the flow. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
If I said Paula, Paula, Paula too often, I'd get in trouble big time. Nice thought. Melton |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Rosebud..sometimes even when you know its true...you just want to hear it Irish Rose...whisper to me...scream to the world Poets Sister...thank you Melton...you can call my name all you want...you wont be in trouble with me LOL |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Spectacular, Paula. I think they nicest thing was to hear him say my name, in whatever voice.. And if he had said it to the world, that would have really been great. You have a way with these subjects.Sandra |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
"Say my name"........This I understand........In fact.....I need to brush up on your poetry as I have been away...I know all I have read from you I have felt..as I feel we are similar in feelings we have experienced.....I enjoy your poetry Paula....very much. Jenn E |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Paula, this poem says a lot. It is SO important to be able to proclaim love openly and loudly...and it is what people in love deserve from each other. Sounds simple enough, right? Excellent writing of a basic fundamental people need. I'm sure you will have no trouble finding someone willing to scream out your name |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Paula! good point made here....I get a real charge out of these guys that really love someone and they don't want to be open about it ...think it makes them look weak or something...and in the end they're almost always forced out into the open with it.. it's such a simple thing really.... what they don't know is that people know anyway and they're only making themselves look bad by denying the one they really love as if there was something wrong with her/him...why would they want to love someone with something wrong with them....they're not lookin good then...................................... and that's my opinion as I see it....ethome |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, as long as he doesn't scream out someone elses name in the middle of ...a cigarette you should be right. Great write write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula tell him we are all listening, we want to hear him say your name Great piece Paula...well penned ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
PAULA, very nice write. Love is the law, love under will. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sandra...hearing him say your name...yes it is special...thank you Jenn...lol well there is lots to read sweetie...thanks...and welcome back...you have been missed...similar feelings? Wanna talk about them? Balladeer...you are so sweet to say so...and yes I think we do need to hear our name on the lips of the one who loves us. ethome...I agree with you...trying to hide how you feel is pretty silly...and whats the point? If you love soemone you should tell them...no matter what...you never know what will happen...you may not ever get another chance...and I like your opinion thank you Kethry...LMAO...I'd get arrested cuz he'd be dead...thank you Tracie...hear that? Tracie says EVERYONE wants to hear...thanks a lot jlocke...louder sweetie I cant quite hear you...thanks |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so true! |
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