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The Muse and the Moon
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The Muse and the Moon |
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Sunshine
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The Muse and the Moon  My muse was stolen by the moon on it's chase through the skies to dawn Muse went merrily, don't you know and followed the true poet's song I shouldn't have stayed up so late writing one night a while back with computer glare before me and night's sky so starlit and black I felt her hovering over my shoulder my writing got a wee bit bolder then she'd whip to the top of my head with tickling wit her innuendo spread that sly little muse was laughing at me her humor was so quickly miasmatic had I known then what I know now I'd have locked her up quick in the attic! We struggled a bit with form and flare for I was attempting to respond to a challenge and while my fingers flew and flew my muse plotted her own little revenge! A tap on the window caught my ear I looked over and almost swooned! My muse had caught the merry eye of that jocular Man in the Moon! "Ta-ta!" said she, as she caught a moonbeam which into my darkened room streamed "Wheee!" said she, as the wind grew colder "I'm off to sit on Marge's shoulder…!" So being the fickle muse that she is I'm grinning at my screen anyway… as I'm sure Marge's darling muse will ultimately head my way. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 25 September, 2000 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-25-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
your muse is still with you - twas only an illusion ~G~ ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
When the moon views A sunshine's muse I don't see how We can lose. Sunshine's dreams On paper reams Will be converted Into moonbeams! Love it, shiney one  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge's muse,the moon, and of course sunshine....hhmmmmmm is the world about to feel a jolt or something? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, you think so? I had SO much fun concocting this little piece...still giggling... 'Deer - a poem...for me? You gallant, you! Mark, maybe a jolt, but not the end! Guys, thanks for reading! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I've been wondering where my muse got to, perhaps this explains it |
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minstrel Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 21Bowling Green, KY |
I've often wondered where my muse goes too from time to time.  ) Maybe they need to take breaks from writing as we do... Nice work.minstrel |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I hug you to pieces ! ! What a precious pondering ! Soooooooooo, that explains the 'new voice' in night ! Moonbeams dancing with delight sharing the muse of the night Back and forth she does flit giving us BOTH a merry fit ! A very fickle tickle, indeed ! LOVE IT ! I'm grinning from ear to ear ! Love YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Playing her little pipes as she went. . . Delightful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
love this one Sun...very cool ... love the moons musings ... the first verse is my fav me thinks kiss the moon and steal the night your muse will return with the morns first light  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww the moon may have taken a small break but we know the SUN is yours forever. How do we know this? Because of the way you always shine so brightly. Hugs, Juls |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How utterly AMusing....  Can I have some? |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
How can your muse ever refuse Your wishes that she stay? I'm now confused, I'm so obtuse, Your poem's better than OK. As for 'Deer, what's he doing here? I'd hoped he'd stay away. To me its clear, I'm sincere, But he just wants to play. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 09-27-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Karilea, I love this poem, another moonlight beauty. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ruth, missing your muse? I'll put out an APB... Minstrel, indeed they do... Marge...fickle tickle indeed!!! LOL!!! Love it! Hugs, you! Sven, now you have to do a poem about pipes...the musical kind... JM...when you're next out on your pass...you can kiss the moon... Juls, you sweet thing...thank you... Nan, be my guest...I'll make dessert, you can come for coffee... LJA, obtuse? Never. Silly? Thankfully always... Cat...they WERE mooning around on Page 1 for awhile, weren't they!? Thank you everyone! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Perfectly delightful Karilea! I could see her flitting about back and forth, teasing and taunting ... beautifully described! An enchanting poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are SO right Kit, she's one perfect little tease.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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