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Come My Love
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Come My Love |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Tonight's the night It's finally come The ending of this quest No more words, no more sighs I'm hungry for the rest My heart is beating faster I tremble deep within The fire rages high Each nerve alive, a'quiver I can no longer lie I want this with all I am I want to give my all That touch, I know Will boil my blood Yet feed my soul Then come my love And let us dance Be wild, be ever free We'll ride the winds of passion And sink back to the sea Come my love with me Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You are awe inspiring...made me think...again I want to ride the winds of passion, On billowing clouds sailing above the oceans of your eyes, Where diamond sparkles are created by the reflected sun. Then release me from your heavenly grip so I may tumble downwards spiraling into the depths of your heart, deeper and deeper, drowning within you, Until i must gasp for air, washed by the tides of emotions, left trembling on the shores, That kiss the sea of love. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Wow, Ron...that's a pretty great answer!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you  Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Pepper, this is so sweet and seductive. I was writing just like this before my heart was crushed by the same subject of the poem. It's a wonderful feeling, the desire for someone, so high, and you know it will be soon. Wow, could I feel this. Wish I still had this happy thought.  Love your writing. Sandra |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
You have taken my heart this night and set it free. Love the poem Rich |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you Sandra Oh, I may yet crash and burn back to earth....but for now I will just enjoy these feelings.Thank you, Rich, I'm glad you enjoyed it...always happy to assist someone with setting something free  laughs Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great feelings.....love can be so heavenly, and you are going to drown yourself in it....you have expressed your feelings so well, it was a pleasure to read it. Charisma.......and hey....Loved the anwer from Ron either...... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Charisma, thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts....yep, submerged completely But that's me, code word, intensity!!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey, peppermint! What a sensual write! I like it!!  sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How did I miss this? It's wonderful "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you, SP!!! I run the gamut of emotions, at times, but I blame it all on my sun sign, Cancer laughs Well, thanks Kathleen!!! I'm glad you read it, and gladder still that you like it Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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