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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan 
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Just how do I count the ways your smile brightens dreary days your words excite my thoughts ablaze my spirits lifted through the haze of dim reality What phrase do i use to paraphrase these lilting lifting erotic ways when i spend time with you? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was upbeat! Reads like a song! How do you count them? One blessing at a time  I enjoyed this one much! WELCOME to Passions! Please join in: /pip/Forum6/HTML/000304.html |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
seraphin- very beautiful and cheery. enjoyed reading this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seraphin - read this one twice I did, very nicely done, and pleasant to read. Bill |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Exciting. That's the word, no? Corinne |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Aw sigh.. memories memories.. this one gives me fond memories.... enjoyed the poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done seraphin. . . and yes, I believe that exciting is the word. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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