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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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this is...one of those odd..angry type...uh.....well, it made me feel better to vent  well.....actually it just made me feel better to listen to def too loud..anyway...tricks made me post this.... LOLhave a good laugh  .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. chuggin a fuzzy navel wishin to God i had 4 or 5 more and a good part of the night to get drunk and then do it again-- it wouldnt take much... welcome to my show-- def lepard lovingly impairing my hearing.... i'm done with the tears i know now i cant expect more nothing from this point is going to change this is it this is all that will be theres no more to take away and pull into the empty spaces i'm not asking anymore i'll ask for nothing else this is it... 10-19-00 dgvarner [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ok, were you chuggin a fuzzy navel when you wrote this... Its sorta got that i'm drunk attitude and everybody else and everything else is screwed up but me. Parker |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
original and gutsy!!!"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..um...yes...yes i was...  what--you didnt notice the attitude til now?? lol IRISH..thanks for reading me!  i guess the first part of this was a bit of my rebellion--that i-hate-you-thing ...the last part was mellow realization...my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Attitude....is that what I find so interesting..  Parker |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Yep, its gutsy and angry, but well put together. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
parker..you find attitude interesting?? kethry..thank you hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
AGAIN, ms. dg, how do you capture such perfect titles??? Really liked this. Unique, authoritative, and pretty darn entertaining… ~ Beth I hate quotations. Tell me what you know. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Have I ever been here before...you sure said a lot here and a lot of it hit close to home |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh yeah. Been there. I'm sitting here looking at roses in a corona bottle with the lime still in it. Thanks for the party. Enjoyed the read. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
serenity..glad to have you join the party...lets make a more lively one next time.. hugs, dg |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Vent all you like and I will join you. Make mine straight up Tequilla though and make sure you leave the worm for me. Wonderful write to blow off steam. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cowboy..pull up a chair baby! we'll drink all nite...and you can have ALL them worms...yeck!  , dg |
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