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...and the rose cries (improv)
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...and the rose cries (improv) |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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...and the rose cries crimson memories fall thorns of the past prick sturdy and yet weak witness to pain...and pleasure drowning in the mist of you swallowed by a kiss of your scent unfolding petals longing to drink of passion... once us then wilting in the shade... alone ... and the rose cries |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
I love when I read a piece, and I can see the image unfolding in my mind. There is something so sad, and somewhat final about a wilting rose...I suppose that's why we have the rose bush itself...always the hope of a new blossom. (rambling here) Have I ever told you just how much I enjoy your writing? ~enb~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
roses are one of my favorite topics, naturally, and I loved this one. I thought about the fragrance left behind, but also the hope of another bloom. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
The images this brought to mind was breath taking.. along with the way your words tell of lost love.. Good job.  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments on this. I'm so glad that it left you all with so much! Again, Thank you!! Robert, have I ever told you how much I love.... your ramble |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Snow~ What a beautiful read, images so perfect and lovely...thanks for sharing  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Tracie~ your reply is appreciated very much! I'm happy you enjoyed this. thank you... Snow |
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