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In our moments alone
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Often I would go to the beach in the evenings of summer and let the cooled sand cover my toes as they dug in. I would walk up near the water sitting down in the sand letting the mist engoulf me and the sound of the water light me. On these evenings my mind would soar through the days of summer trips taken on the motorcycle on northern roads that led me to my own brand of salvation. Those nights on the beach alone gave me strength to survive my hell and in those times I found words that I would put to paper. Those words became my outlet my due course of what I should believe a pathway to my feelings and my hearts soul. Now I long for that beach and those nights alone on it but only to share those times with one whom I love and long for. And in those moments now alone, when I look to the moon and cry I know she looks at the same sky holds her breath, and we are one. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and in those times I found words that I would put to paper. Those words became my outlet my due course of what I should believe a pathway to my feelings and my hearts soul. Now I long for that beach and those nights alone on it but only to share those times with one whom I love and long for. And in those moments now alone, when I look to the moon and cry I know she looks at the same sky holds her breath, and we are one. ==================== your poetry is a pathway to your soul and its a beautiful trip to take  your timing is perfect...was about to sign off.. i had some playtime in open...this weekend... check out my song ~skin tight~ (hehe) later-star-gazer me |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful and familiar.  My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
 < !signature-->Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so. B. Russell [This message has been edited by JP (edited 09-25-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very lovely...James |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very beautiful Michael........as is all you do. Funny how one moon has so much meaning to so many people...it just makes the world feel smaller somehow. As Always Jenn E |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
The moon has a beautiful glow, but not as bright as my Nuclear Station!! LOL  A wonderful write Michael. From your heart, as always. Love ya, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
"Now I long for that beach and those nights alone on it but only to share those times with one whom I love and long for. And in those moments now alone, when I look to the moon and cry I know she looks at the same sky holds her breath, and we are one." Definitely identifying with you here. Great write. Keith Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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