Open Poetry #10 |
In Time II--(to sunny1's In Time) |
Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Time was Love was Time passed Love passed living ceased Love touched Love took Love left Time stopped seeing ended Flowers wilt Hope fades Dreams die Before I love again so will I thoughts as i read "In Time" by Sunny1 Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just wonderful brown eyes...even without reading Sunnys' poem. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hey i like this!1 couple readings and dense me got the picture its great yuh |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Hi Jamie ~~~ Oh, yes......this is perfect, in thought and feeling!! It's good to see you again, my friend......and I'm honored that you used my poem for your writing! Follow your dream! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
As a day disappears a new one begins with a touch of soft rain he drinks from it and his dreams will come alive you will see the flower wilted, love again Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Jamie* Wow....in this brief work you said what would take me pages...I envy this form of writing and you wrote like a pro...great work~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Prometheus, haven't seen you around much and I have so missed your work. This is an exceptional comeback. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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