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A Heart To Bleed |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Depressant sheath surrounds my world- Within a hold of bitter hurt… Relinquish not, my Will of Fate- However far I shall debate, That only I may compensate… Desire taunts my very veins- Beyond a doubt, of Love Insane, And it is I, who is to blame… Flaunt her hold for all it's worth- Insensitivity, a blatant curse, ‘Tis from my maker I shall nurse… Drain me of tears, but only once- For even weakened hearts must hunt, Beyond a touch, a mere soft front… This belies the truth in me- A fragile soul, To crave, I need, For one man taken, *A Heart To Bleed* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Devina~ SO AMAZING! Wow!  "Drain me of tears, but only once- For even weakened hearts must hunt, Beyond a touch, a mere soft front…" WOW! Loved this.  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ It is so good to see you and read such a hauntingly lovely write from your pen. Big ole *HUGS* from me to you ! I've missed you so much. I'm glad you are here ... please stay awhile. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey lady...have missed you much. And when you come back, you come back in style!!! Well written, though sad...but lol...the more things change the more they stay the same? LOl...and welcome home hugs. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, have missed your sweet words, sad or otherwise. Hugs to you sweet poet. Parker |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Desire taunts my very veins- Beyond a doubt, of Love Insane, And it is I, who is to blame… ================ Drain me of tears, but only once- For even weakened hearts must hunt, Beyond a touch, a mere soft front… This belies the truth in me- A fragile soul, To crave, I need, For one man taken, *A Heart To Bleed* ================ hey you... missed your poetry exceptional my dear ... and this is indeed exceptional.. you always did bleed so poetic ...  wonderful to read ya ... and that 3rd verse ... damn!!!!!! (have you been peeking in me windows) dont stay away so long no more later-sweet-poet-gator jm |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hey hey Miss Devina....Welcome Back!  I know just where you're coming from with this piece! "Flaunt her hold for all it's worth- Insensitivity, a blatant curse, ‘Tis from my maker I shall nurse…" Very powerful and piercing....excellent! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
As you can see we've all missed ya Dev...glad to see ya back and writing some incredible words...well done hon Hope you stay a while Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
SEA- So glad to hear from you hun...thank you much!! Marge- Hey there my sweet mentor...(G*) I've actually been in the process of moving...but I've missed you TERRIBLY!! I'm hoping to be back permanently real soon...*Love you too* serenity- I think things always stay the same my sweet sis!! Hugs back to you...James- A hug from you always makes it better dearest...you know that!! Janet- I'm thinking that we all put ourselves here at one time or another, huh? ( Of course I Might be be peeking just a little..LOL) Missed you too... Sheri- You are one of the very few, that I KNEW would feel me on this one girl!! Know that I'm still there..and STILL trying to get somewhere with it!!!! hehe Tracie- glad to hear from you too sweetie...ty Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DEVINA!!! Now you know that I missed you too. . . I can see by this one that you've been going through a lot. . . but you know that we'll always have a place for you here. . . Great work. . . and I'm with Marge. . .please stay awhile. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely written..and i can tell you have been missed by reading the other responses..looking forward to reading more poetry from you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
quite Shakesperean!! I like it. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, you say it so well, and I feel it so much. God, how it hurts. Great writing, hope to read more soon. Catalinamoon |
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