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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-10-17 05:19 PM


A repost.

The search

A veteran of offals upheaval
The cynical of evils needle
Shriven and driven by cold gage rage
Rests this fair head in its golden age.

And though I do not feel a sinner
It stays me a very cold dinner.
Makes me dyspeptic, slightly eclectic
And the gustiest of gastronomic.

I need me a wind to blow it away
A little breeze on a warm summers day.
I need a taste of the honey of green
If not that, then something in between.

So I rove in the fields of clover
Raking it over to find a nova.
If successful you'll certainly know
Just by the bright of the nova's glow.

And I turned around aching in the wiled
When I spied cotton candy undefiled.



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insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-10-17 09:58 PM


Great piece!
I liked this read.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
2 posted 2000-10-17 10:12 PM


Awesome work, one of your best, I'd say!

Corinne

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2000-10-18 08:27 AM


Insect,
thank you so much.

Corinne,
Really?

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