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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-10-17 11:58 AM

I've been through the offal of the needle
The upheaval of the evil weevil.
Shriven and given a cold gage of rage
To sleep upon in my golden age.

And though I do not feel a sinner
It stays me a very cold dinner.
I am dyspeptic, sightly eclectic
With a touch of comic gastronomic.

I need me a wind to blow it away
A little breeze on a warm summers day.
I need a taste of the honey of green
If not that, then something in between.

So I rove in the fields of clover
Testing clover for a super nova.
If successful you'll certainly know
By the bright of the super nova's glow.

And the clown turned round and smiled at the child
With a huge cotton candy undefiled.
So I do not recommend this stroll
Unless you have a very clear goal.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-10-17 12:45 PM

Super Nova, reporting for duty...

{~,^}

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-10-17 05:31 PM

I need me a wind to blow it away
A little breeze on a warm summers day.
I need a taste of the honey of green
If not that, then something in between.

So I rove in the fields of clover
Testing clover for a super nova.
If successful you'll certainly know
By the bright of the super nova's glow.

And the clown turned round and smiled at the child
With a huge cotton candy undefiled.
So I do not recommend this stroll
Unless you have a very clear goal.
==================
well its perfectly clear to me...
your call is to write the -- be all -- see all ...
coolest, wisdom kissed rhyme known to poetry
and my goal is equally as clear ..
I wanna INHALE every single last verbage of you. *winkiewinkie*

later-me-cosmic-cadence-cool-constellation-gator
me

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2000-10-17 05:42 PM

Sunshine,
Thank you super nova but I rewrote the poem.
Read the search if you have time and thank you for this read. *L* Sy

JM,
I think I'm writing lately just to read your replies. I rewrote the poem and call it The Search. If you have time take a peek. winkiewinkie Dinkie.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 2000-10-17 07:48 PM

Well DANG ME! Sir Tabin
For your words be ragin'
Your style I'm diggin'
With each word I'm wiggin'

Just draw us a cold bath
For a dip in your rath
'Cause this be true cool
Beyond clown or fool

Smokin!

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