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An Angel To Love |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 The moment I heard your cry I knew you were mine Sending thanks to God most high As your eyes began to shine An angel bestowed to me To care for and love Finding a home in my heart eternally As sent pure from him above Each day you grow and live My love grows stronger still Striving each day to give So much that you overfill Look in my eyes and you will see As my heart opens...hear me say My angel daughter...a gift to me I love you sweetheart...in every way *For Katrina* [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Butterflies~ This is truly beautiful. Not in words alone... this needs to be in a frame! Just lovely. deb |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
absolutely gorgeous BDC  A beautiful tribute Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The moment I heard your cry I knew you were mine Sending thanks to God most high As your eyes began to shine An angel bestowed to me To care for and love Finding a home in my heart eternally As sent pure from him above =================== I know Trina will adore this... a touching glowing mothers tribute ... better be carefull those Angel wings are showing  she has inspired this sweet poem in you with her own beautiful butterfly ways .... and now... hows this for a challenge... write one about Matthew... and CAPTURE his true spirit and gumption   LOLwe need a whole new book of poetic adjectives to write that one later-proud-mommeeee-gator love ya me |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh BDC how your Mother's heart shines through in this beautiful poem. Simply lovely. Bonnie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey...you...got me all misty eyed with this one...very touching, Holly. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Butterfly....this is just so beautiful. I know that Katrina shall always treasure these words from your heart. I can't wait to see you take up JM's challenge, it should be most interesting. Once again this is so beautiful, and special, take care my friend!"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
What a beautiful poem - you have a great way with words...so heartfelt. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tis the love of the sweetest mother I know kissed of heart and hugged from angels on high There are mom's and mommies and mothers aglow But none with your pureity my sweet butterfly The love in your tone and all that you show The tender caring in your proudest "mom" sighs Your fire for her happiness as you watch her grow Brings the sweetest tears as this cowboy cries Holly, I know of no other mother that outshines the love you have for both of your children and I know that she will forever cherish this piece from you. It is without a doubt the sweetest read of yours ever and so deservingly so. I could go on and on but will just say to all out there...I KNOW for fact of her love and sincerity in this piece. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This one really tugs at the heartstrings, butterflies. Beautifully done.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Deb* Thank you so much, I've read your poem about your own angel and know you feel the same...I'll be replying to it soon Maree* Thank you, I truly appreciate you reading~ J.M.* Me thinks that Dennis the Menace has nothin on Matthew....wowsers that would be a true test of my poetic abilities ...LOL Thank you my sweet SS~Bonnie* Thank you so much for your kind reply~ S'en* Awe....you touch my heart with your replies girlie...thank you so much~ Eagle* LOL...ya I'm sure you'd love to see it...figures you would back her on this one... Thank you so much for your always sweet replies my friend~Azure* Thank you so much...I'm very honored by the compliment~ Mark* What a beautiful reply, thank you so much, it means alot that you would say that...my children are two of the most important people in my life...I'm glad you see that. Thank you my friend~ 'Deer* I'm touched that you replied...thank you from the bottom of my heart~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BDC~ From one Mom to another, this touched my heart so sweetly...I love this. - SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ A treasure from your heart for one of the treasures of your heart. Mom's are like that yeah, we are. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this is very beautiful |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I also have a daughter and she is all grown up now and given me a grandaughter who looks just like her...lovely poem "butterflies dont cry" ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Holly--There is no more tender light giving love then from a mother to her child...I can see yours shining in this lovely poem! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sea* Thank you so much for your kindness~ Marge* Yes she is a treasure...thank you so much~ Rosebud* Thank you~ Victoria* A lucky woman you are Thank you very much~Martie* You've touched my heart with your sweet comment, thank you so much~ |
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