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Kethry
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Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-10-17 03:33 AM


What are little girls made of?
"My mother always said"
and visions of what a lady is
keep running through my head

I should never whistle
Or put my hand in pocket
I should never talk at all
Just fiddle with my locket

wearing jeans a no! no!
must always wear a dress
all these admonitions
have me confused I guess

I know about the little boys
Made of slugs and snails
I know about their drooling
When we just, wag our tails

So, what are little girls made of?
It's something I don't know
I will look to Sunshine
She lady's template will bestow

They say that girls are made of
Sugar and spice you see
What exactly does that mean?
… It is a mystery

Sunshine's always caring
She truly sugar and spice
But does that mean she's very HOT
While also sweetly nice




Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2000-10-17 04:33 AM


Kethry, this is a fantastically well written.
I love this, I really do. Oh I have missed your work, it's always so marvellous.
Take care
                        Marsha
          

Kethry
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2 posted 2000-10-17 04:42 AM


Marsha,
coming from you that's high praise indeed. Thank you so much.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2000-10-17 07:09 AM


It flowed and I truly related to this one, Kethry, good job.

Kathleen



Kethry
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4 posted 2000-10-17 07:12 AM


Thank you, Kathleen for your kind words and your faithfulness.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-10-17 07:32 AM


Lynne--

this was darling. i really liked the work you have created here. i am coming to expect nothing but great work from you though. take care.

~amy~

Kethry
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6 posted 2000-10-17 07:47 AM


Thanks Amy,
I appreciate you visiting and admiring my work.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2000-10-17 07:51 AM


Kethry, this is beautiful and such a caring tribute to one that has brought us so much.  Wonderful write and I am sorry if I miss some of yours but my time is taken up much of late with other matters but I will make every attempt.  Just didn't want you to think I was not reading anymore...I AM!!!!  So glad you decided to stay.
Kethry
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Victoria Australia
8 posted 2000-10-17 07:55 AM


Mark, thanks so much.
the question always for me is to post or not to post. I probably still would if nobody read...but it's so nice when you do.
Keth.


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-10-17 08:10 AM


Kethry
This is precious!
I think she brings us both
Sugary sweet and hot and spicy
And so do you!
Liz

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
10 posted 2000-10-17 08:21 AM


Liz,
I think she does too.  
Keth.


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2000-10-17 08:36 AM


such a lovely tribute kethry, wonderful work, I enjoyed  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Sunshine
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12 posted 2000-10-17 08:36 AM


Kethry...I'm giggling and blushing like a school girl...this is just too cute! And I do believe you've rendered this voice speechless...at least, for a moment.

How can I thank you?  I believe I'll find a way, but it's going to take a little more imagination...

for now, will you accept my humble thanks?

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
13 posted 2000-10-17 04:14 PM


Dark Angel, Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sunshine, blushing like a schoolgirl hey. I guess that means you're experiencing a hot flush...too much spice maybe  

Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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