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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx 
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tomorrow, today, the same as one yesterday, last week, can't be undone the paths of the future, glimmer and shine the road you had traveled, creates a line a line to be walked, yet seldom straight a line unbroken, even if you're late free form and floating, yet solid as rock here today there tomorrow, the same as stock can't predict it, can't even deny the road ahead, will cause someone to die too many paths cross each other a sister, a wife, and even a mother a name, a face, a simple loving hand a place you knew, your favorite band everything, something, nothing for sure the same could be said for what was once pure smile and laugh when you wish to cry because tomorrow might be the day you die "There were times in my life when I was going insane tryin to walk through the pain when I lost my grip and I hit the floor yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
skipptiy i got 53 minutes to live and all you girl poets are no where around me aghhh okokok serious Lee i likes it desperado its sad and melancholic and its the truth for sure |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your words are wise, my young friend... and I hope you're OK and not being sent anywhere near all the skirmishes that are befalling the world these days...  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I often wished that Steven Tyler could have been a poet, with that kind of emotion and intensity, he would have been a great one! I liked this. Kathleen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
desperado, we hear you...we really do...be careful...and I'm sending an angel to sit on your shoulder... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
A very gripping piece Des, and so very true. One never knows what the future holds. You've expressed these thoughts well. This one is going into my library!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
great writing and you've phrased the reality of it perfectly... life is short... yep... and so are you!  lol... just kidding, sweet soldier! i luv ya!! *smooch* and can't wait to hear you're back in the states... hope all is well with you!!  and Rose, Steven Tyler IS a poet! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I don't know how I missed this. As usual, too late, but it sounds like growing and learning to me! ((hugs)) Wherever you are, I'm sending prayers. |
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