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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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 hidden behind the pain i know that i need to type out the words because my head aches when i try to stop them from coming forth but my questions have no answers so i stopped asking them nevertheless my head aches i feel the words scurry and try to slip through the door when they think me unaware a thought here a thought there a reason not proven an action uncontested a question unanswered to date, a solution impossible to pin down and a poem to put it all together that almost makes it to paper before i crumple the results and scrap the effort the pain making it too hard to follow through and so i lean towards action with no forethought knowing that it is folly on foot but if my feet don't propel me forward and if i don't reach out and unlatch the gate then who will? this side is dark and full of rain so what do i lose to actually step through, the other side could only be equally as dark or not but my head hurts with the pecking when my fingers insist on trying to think to spite the pain...and now now i must close my eyes for a moment or more i will continue, maybe tomorrow will be a better day this effort has been too draining and now my head hurts too much to even blink and certainly much too much to think [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I thought it would help, I'd FedEx some aspirin to you... but I know Bayer doesn't have the answer to your hurt. *S* So I'll just send hugs and love... and cushions for your fingertips so they can keep typing. *S* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is amazing, and I'm ashamed to say I don't believe I've read any of your poetry! I certainly will from now on I can reassure you of that!! Kathleen |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
suthern...lol..ok, will be waiting for the cushions...an nope no meds...my stomach can barely take the prescribed ones and only cause i have to...i would give them up too, but the consequences are worse than taking them  hugs and love to you too and Irish rose, don't feel bad, I think you have read me before, I name hop when I don't feel comfortable posting under a certain name...most people know its me right away from my style of writing, so I guess its only me that's pretending  ...I think you have read me under the name jinxed thank you so much for your comments |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I know I've not read enough - but you do write very well - I'm sure your purpose is benign but ... I must comment on multiple names however - If I were in charge - no one would be allowed to be a multinamed poster. I left another forum because of truly vile insensitive anonymous posters who I could not further describe without using words that would turn to asterisks. Thus I felt more secure here knowing everyone must login. Now I'm learning multiple names are allowed - and it distresses me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The picture you posted with this poem is beautiful...makes me think of a black panther. "This side is dark and full of rain so what do I lose to actually step through, the other side could only be equally dark, or not." In my experience I believe it was fear that kept me from stepping thru or a desire to hold onto what little hope of love I still possessed....I finally stepped thru when I felt like I could stand no more pain...it was more than I could bear...James |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
Wilfred, I mailed you a bit more, but am sorry if my "names" have offended, I can't promise I won't have another, but I am trying to stick with Corazon and heal my heart from within, not using the crutch of a new name, thanks for your comments jm, I can tell from your comments that you have suffered a great heartache in your life, am glad you are doing better, and thank you much for your touching comments |
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