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for my lady of the night. . .
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for my lady of the night. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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my lady of the night hear the song I sing for thee a song of twilight desires and midnight fantasies sung where moonlight shadows play across the walls of existence harmonizing with the voices of other lovers in a symphony of passion with every touching crescendo feel the melody I play for thee a melody of starlight tunes and sunlight dreams heard when candlelight flickers kiss across the skies of romance orchestrating with the instruments of other lives in a sonata of love and in the dimenuendo know the notes I write for thee a strain of dawnlight memories and torchlight reveries written when firelight dancers flare across the oceans of time synthesizing with the keys of other hearts in an aria of roses ------------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
Oh, i like this. plenty of feeling in there, and i love the contrasts too! This is the kind of thing i would love writing... Had I a lady of the night... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening Sven, It's a pleasure to read your writings. This one to me is exceptional. Just touched me, as you wrote to your lady of the night. Bill |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Hi, Sven  yeah I thought this was beauiful Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Sven, what can I say hmmm... how sweet and tender this poem is Coco |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
can i be your agent? this is extra sensasual i mean sensational [This message has been edited by monique (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
*sigh* such beautiful thoughts, and a beautiful soul I know.... All we all want is for someone to feel this way about us, now that isn't such an ask is it? I think not. Great stuff my soul teasing friend  *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Captivating piece my friend, soothing and tender...loved it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Absolutely lovely! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
As always your heart sings such a beautiful song. She would be a fool not to listen to it. Very lovely my friend. Juls |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This is beautifully written, a song defintely worth singing and being heard. I really like this one Marsha |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"with every touching crescendo feel the melody I play for thee a melody of starlight tunes and sunlight dreams heard when candlelight flickers kiss across the skies of romance orchestrating with the instruments of other lives in a sonata of love" Sven~ see why I call you the king of romance?? this is just simply lovely hon. full of such tenderness and love. any woman would be a fool not to listen to a song that is so beautiful. you show your heart as always in this piece. take care. amy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
My favorite Sven..love those shadows haa..enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sven ~~~ < !signature-->What a beautifully musical piece with your own signature touch of romance!!! I truly love this one, as I do all of what comes from your pen!!  Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
simply beautiful, Sven ... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all for your wonderful words. . . I am glad that all of you enjoyed. . . The song always plays my friends. . . are you listening? -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sven This is absolutely beautiful! It would capture any heart Liz |
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