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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
T I C T O C Till the breath of my last I shall love thee divinely Caressing two souls you and I have become we Till the beat stops of heart Only then shall we know Count not seconds of life in eternity our love shall meet forevermore  Coco |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Coco, a very nice piece. Sweet and elegant. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! coco This little piece is a gem...just loved it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Coco! I love it! Denise |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning CocoBaci, A very powerful poem you have written with only a few lines. Wow! Bill |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Each and every second of love you show shines with the passing of time given memories....wonderful write. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
......Coco...... Such a beautiful work of art you have here! And I especially love it for the subject...Time... The title reminded me of one of my heroes, who didn't have enough time..... Great writing, my friend! Follow your dream! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Not to be set on the mantle, but to be worn around the wrist. . . Wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
To all you special Poets who pass by to read the lil rhymes I write and you who share your poetry to this devout reader... I send you hugs of friendship accompanied with smiles... Coco |
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