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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Some time after mom died dad shared < !signature-->this with me. He told me he no longer cared for their laws... He was going to see mom no matter what they said. Three years later he’s still driving to be with her. So I wrote this * * * * * * * * * * * days seemed to dwindle he saw fewer and few one day came they in lapsing all together and another came too only words remained the once elated spirit which was caring to tinder cries now wears glasses o’er his weary eyes. Then they told him... he could no longer drive. Writing, isn't just something I do... it's something I am... To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my greatest delight... [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale--you have expressed in your special way the sadness of seeing someone you love grow old...Hugs...to you and Rosemary...I am so happy about her news! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Lucky, the bond of father and son shines within your words. Nicely done. Robert Joseph |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Martie, I knew it was wrong... but I'd sure never tell him so... that's my momma. You are ever a dear. love you sis Rob, It's not as I would wish it. Dad and I are so much alike, you know the real rural reclusive. Doesn't talk much even to me. These are rare words. thank you... dale Writing, isn't just something I do... it's something I am... To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my greatest delight... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
My dad was equally devastated when mom died - it was 5 years before he thought about dating and by the time he got up courage - he died a month later this is beautifully expressed Dale |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
You've got a caring heart bill. dale Writing, isn't just something I do... it's something I am... To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my greatest delight... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ You have to know this touches me tenderly. What endearing thoughts ... to think he loved her so much. You've got the softest heart I know. And that's a really good thing ...  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, If I didn't keep you so busy you may be able to read a bit more. Thanks for all you've done. love and caring sis. dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lucky~ a loving and tender piece...very lovingly written. HUGS Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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