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Sitting in Shade Watching Sunlight
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Sitting in Shade Watching Sunlight |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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A warm fall day The color changes Mostly still to come I view sunlight filtering Through Poplar leaves Sparkling on dewdrops Enhancing some autumn colors Just beginning to peek Among the deep greens Calmness pervades me Soothing my soul Till I smell cider Cinnamon sugared fried cakes As far removed from Dunkin As Pate from Kentucky chicken And I revel in the season ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ 'Cinnamon sugared fried cakes' Now ya' done gone and made me HONGRY ! Flip those sugar cakes this way !  I'm not kidding ! Now I have to stop reading and fix something to eat. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
It is a beautiful day here too billy.. loved your relaxing poem..sounds like you are content.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This will carry me through the rest of October. The images are fresh, the wording made me hungry for a candied apple. Good poetry does that you know! Kathleen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--this makes me want to rake up some leaves and then jump into the middle of them...and then eat cinnaman cakes and Cidar....very nice read! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Hongry Marge- Fall is time for special indulgences Go for it (thanks)Relaxed Vicky It was a laid back day ~G~ (thanks) Candy Apple Rose- thank you (for the 'good'  )Cinnamon Cider Martie- (picking leaves from your hair) Thank you - save me some ~S~ |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Anyone who is passionate about lovemaking AND nature, has got to be a kindred soul to me! Ask my husband - he'll tell ya. Beautiful images for my soul. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
superb imagery combined with sensory scents.... fabulous writing..... |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
If I were not sitting upon this season, this verse would make me desperately wish for it. After reading, I can feel the grass on my toes and the apple burning on my tongue. This was a wonderful read, Thank you Wilfred! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful..beautiful descriptions... I loved this as I do all your work I have read. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Bill I love the sights and smells of this poem. What visions of autumn you spin. As soon as the sun comes up, I'll go out and take a look. Liz |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wils---you brought me there with this one...beautifully descriptive and a lovely pen! Thank you! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Rosemary - I thought ALL poets - (as part of the 'artistic' establishment) were by definition 'passionate' - but you're right - those are the top 2 I'm passionate about Thank you!Doreen- ANY non-negative response from you - Is High praise to this hubmle would-be poet - Thank you Elizabeth Cor- Each season brings its beauties and sensory pleasures again and again fresh and new - to keep our souls alive - Thank you Temptress - You are too kind - (to tell the truth I felt like a 'hack' writing greeting card verse when I completed this) The responses tell me otherwise - so I must say thanks! Liz- If I've pleased you - it is but a very partial repayment for the pleasures your poetry has given me - thank you Serenity- Bless you for your kind words - thank you so much |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMMMMMM cider flavored kisses and that wonderful smoky autumn scent...you conjure it all up in this lovely verse |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lovely imagery in this Wilfred...great writings Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Wilfred... You write a lovely poem here... Made me recall times back home in the east... Thank you so much for an enjoyable read... Coco |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula - Tracie -- CocoBaci- I truly appreciate your responses - While living in the Detroit area there were at least two cider mills that preserved the feel and flavor of Fall as I always want to remember it - a real water wheel to power the press and candied apples, fried cakes, and cider galore! Thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea - you ARE a ray of sunshine for me - even without animated Gif's. thank you |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhhhhhhhh a perfect autumn day Wilfred... sipping on cider even as I write....This is beautiful. Bonnie |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Cinnamon sugared fried cakes As far removed from Dunkin As Pate from Kentucky chicken And I revel in the season - I LOVED this stanza - has such a feel of the south to it, and a reminder of how important the sense of smell is to memory. Corinne |
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