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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-13 06:11 PM



                       sunlight kisses the lips of a new day
                       as gardenia drifts in the wind away

                         taste of lovers wine is in the air
                       blending into the hue of rainbow hair

                       glory are the ocean waves of ice blue
                       gently breeze tickles the morning dew

                        dancing are the dandelion wishes
                          sparkles of pollinated kisses

                       flower clouds bloom above the earth
                          rainfall baptizes days rebirth

                       strings of our hearts play a new song
                         the art of angel wings carries on



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-10-13 08:16 PM


Very very beautiful, Victoria! Just lovely!

Denise

Wilfred Yeats
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2 posted 2000-10-13 08:32 PM


It is rare with a poem I like that I can't pick a favorite line - this is a first!  
Robert Joseph
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3 posted 2000-10-13 08:34 PM


Victoria, Your passion collides with nature once again, giving birth to yet another blossom. (no poison ivy, that's good...smile)

Robert Joseph

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4 posted 2000-10-13 09:35 PM


thank you Denise..nice to hear from you again today..i think you popped in for breakfast lunch and dinner now haa..you are welcome anytime..

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2000-10-13 09:40 PM


Good evening Victoria,
Very well written and a pleasure to read.

Bill

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6 posted 2000-10-13 09:43 PM


Thank you bill..so nice of you to say..

                           ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Victoria
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7 posted 2000-10-13 09:50 PM


Thank you Robert..as long as that is all i give birth to haa....giggling here..

                           ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Victoria
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8 posted 2000-10-13 09:54 PM


Good evening Bill..I just came home from dinner and it is nice to see nice responses like yours waiting for me..pleased you enjoyed..

                             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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