Blind Date...part II...the real thing

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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2000-10-13 12:56 PM

Hello, your email
   says to me
Its 3:30 and I am
   on my way
Its a two hour drive
   if I hurry.
Two hours to do all
   those womanly things
LOL you guys just
   havent a clue
So I primped and
   I prettied
Chose my clothes with
   such care
Then walked out
   the door
To this blind date
   with you
We met at the friends
   who gave you my name
Our conversation flowed
   just like online
We laughed and we
   teased each other
While the day slowly
   faded to dusk
We popped popcorn and
   watched with childish glee
A BOND...JAMES BOND
   movie marathon
Then slipped quietly
   away
Into the chill
   autumn night
To walk under that
   harvest moon
To stroll in the park
   like young lovers
Holding hands, stealing kisses,
   even a hug or two
Then we went back
   to face the teasing
Told ya she's a
   romantic fool
You just smiled and
   said to me softly
Then I guess I
   must be one too.

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

1 posted 2000-10-13 01:03 PM

Awesome stuff!!! So much caught in one poem, anticipation, excitement, sparked romance...mmm, great stuff. *remembers he's a guy* Ahem, yeah its good. :P

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-10-13 03:42 PM

What an honest read, and so uplifting, carried me through all of the stages of how the feeling would really be. Good writing here.

Kathleen

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-10-13 04:06 PM

This date sounds like lots of fun....and romantic...James

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2000-10-13 04:11 PM

Wonderful piece, Paula....it flowed very well too!

Nathan

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2000-10-13 06:56 PM

I've been hanging out to read part II for a while now Paula.

A lovely read!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2000-10-16 05:48 AM

LOL Bob...thanks and trust me i KNOW you are a guy.

Irish Rose...well it was a fun date...not at all what I expected.

James...it was fun and romantic...now we just have to see where it goes.

Nathan...thank you

EagleOne...well thanks for looking for it and glad you enjoyed it

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2000-10-16 08:32 AM

Paula,
at last!
Even in my petulance I've been waiting impatiently for this one.
You didn't disappoint me.
Be well
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

8 posted 2000-10-16 07:52 PM

Paula

I met someone special on a blind date once. It was great. I hope your special someone is still around. You certainly penned it beautifully.

Ariana

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2000-10-16 10:44 PM

Kethry...so glad I didnt disappoint...was a good time as well

Ariana...hes around...not near close enough but around lol...thank you

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